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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2003 14:20 CDT
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great chappie! it doesnt matter that u didnt do the lemon. we'll let our imaginations run wild lol. i liked it even w/o it n im a lil hentai too. i like this story. cant wait to see what happens next. =D
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Title: Hey!
Reviewed By: Slywolf9 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2003 03:02 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey! wow! hehe! this was a good fic so far! i noe, i dont noe where to put commas either! lol.....i also hate math....well, ever since i left hawaii that is...sigh....i like this story tho, yea, ur on my fav authors so hehe i really like this! so, i noe how u feel outta place riting a lemon scene....im still unsure about mine.....humm...well, i really like this story so far, but shouldnt inuyasha mark kagome as his? or maybe ask her first hn? sigh...well, i gotts ta go now cuz my mom i gonna come n tell me go to bed....but im really just gonna stay up all nite n rite my new chapters in my journal! hehe! ^-* lol, well, good job n plz update soon! Ai-Lani/Sly
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Reviewed By: 1Drk6 On: October 09, 2003 14:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story so far!!!
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2003 21:02 CDT
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lol nice way to end that chapter
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Reviewed By: dbzgurl_34 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2003 17:49 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a really good story cant wait til ur next update hope its really soon.
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2003 01:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
good story. it's becoming very interesting. update very soon!
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Reviewed By: RavenShadow [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2003 10:25 CDT
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Oh, that cliffy!!! I need to know what is going to happen next. Please update soon I really like this fic so far.
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2003 19:41 CDT
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*too busy adding story to my favorites to write a review*
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2003 19:37 CDT
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aw i really like this! there are many fics out there like it but something seems diff bout urs. keep it up
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Reviewed By: Yumiki-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2003 14:45 CDT
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EVIL!!!!!!!!!!!!! OK Up--date SOON. Oh...... THe story is ... GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2003 02:27 CDT
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oooo. not bad. please make it happy? i don't much like sad stories. keep up the good work! and update! soon!
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Reviewed By: Sesshoumaru_Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2003 23:43 CDT
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update quickly, i hate cliffhangers!!!Good story by the way. LOL
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Reviewed By: RavenShadow [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2003 12:51 CDT
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This is good so far, I hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: Fyrloche [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2003 07:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good! Definately better than my own work. Keep up the good work.
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Title: "Alone"
Reviewed By: nightmagic17 On: October 05, 2003 02:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your writting is excellent. It is very good. You have a strong start and i hope u stick whith story and finish it. I think this is going to be so good. Please update soon. Later.
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