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Reviewed By: angelbabe17(not signed in) On: November 16, 2003 08:17 CST
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awww inu n kag r soooooooooo adorable!!
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2003 05:21 CST
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aww. i love that chapter! it was so cute. it made me jelous. *sigh* can't wait for more! up date soon and keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2003 01:13 CST
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mm, thats so cute! i love it! keep up the good work and up date soon!!
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Reviewed By: Eliaz On: October 25, 2003 22:41 CDT
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Great chapter! Update soon!!!
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Title: Lo
Reviewed By: Slywolf9 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2003 22:34 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
eeeeeee!!! KAWAIIIIIIIIII!!!!!!!!!! *squeals more* ee! i LOVE it!!!! soooo cute! i really can't wait for another chapter! u r gonna continue rite? rite? *panicks and runs around as inuyasha hits her on head* owww*rubs head* well, i take it hope fully u will! good job! nice n fluffy! -Lani
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Reviewed By: Kestrel [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2003 22:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the story, keep it up. also, you have a few of your terms messed up. His billowy pants are called Hakama, and his white shirt is either called a Gi or a kimono. The haori is correct. Just thought you would like a little friendly heads up on that.
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2003 03:21 CDT
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Don't forget to up date! i want to know what happens in the morning! keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: c_vega On: October 17, 2003 01:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're doing a great job. And don't worry about commas and such, they are minor in the grand scheme of things anyways. Your story is very enjoyable, and I love how it is progressing. I can't wait for the next chapter. Happy endings are a good thing by the way! *hint, hint, nudge, nudge* And don't worry about not being able to write a lemon, your lime was quite good. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: AlCk On: October 12, 2003 19:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! I love this story! PLZ update soon!
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2003 14:20 CDT
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great chappie! it doesnt matter that u didnt do the lemon. we'll let our imaginations run wild lol. i liked it even w/o it n im a lil hentai too. i like this story. cant wait to see what happens next. =D
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Title: Hey!
Reviewed By: Slywolf9 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2003 03:02 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey! wow! hehe! this was a good fic so far! i noe, i dont noe where to put commas either! lol.....i also hate math....well, ever since i left hawaii that is...sigh....i like this story tho, yea, ur on my fav authors so hehe i really like this! so, i noe how u feel outta place riting a lemon scene....im still unsure about mine.....humm...well, i really like this story so far, but shouldnt inuyasha mark kagome as his? or maybe ask her first hn? sigh...well, i gotts ta go now cuz my mom i gonna come n tell me go to bed....but im really just gonna stay up all nite n rite my new chapters in my journal! hehe! ^-* lol, well, good job n plz update soon! Ai-Lani/Sly
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Reviewed By: 1Drk6 On: October 09, 2003 14:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story so far!!!
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2003 21:02 CDT
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lol nice way to end that chapter
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Reviewed By: dbzgurl_34 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2003 17:49 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a really good story cant wait til ur next update hope its really soon.
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2003 01:39 CDT
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good story. it's becoming very interesting. update very soon!
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