| "Kindergarten Heero" Reviews/Comments [ 40 ] |
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Reviewed By: Princess2000204 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2004 23:46 CST
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This is my ultimate favorite HeeroxDuo fic, mainly because I absolutely love Kindergarden Cop! Please try and update this one a little faster ^_^
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Title: Update soon agian! Please?!?
Reviewed By: Onee-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2004 21:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is really great!!! I always liked the movie kindergarten cop and Heero really fits into it the way you write this! I just love it!!! ^__^ and Une is perfect for the role of the principal... especially in this chapter! I really hope you update soon again!!!
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2004 20:54 CST
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'Obviously he's had too damn much free time if he's actually developing a personal life' Whahaha! Nice chapter, I was rather looking forward to Heero showing that nasty Mueller what-for! I liked Meiran's protective streak too. Post more!
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: December 08, 2003 19:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow I just really loved this chapter and look forward to reading more ...As always I think your doing a great job on writing this story and I will keep on reading it...So until your next update TTFN
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2003 01:06 CST
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Ah, this story has become my regular weekly (or nearly) pick-me-up, and boy did I need it today. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter where I bet some nasty bully is about to find out you can work with young children and still be veeery strong...*cackles* THe plot is still flowing nicely, and the characters live and breathe and drag us into their story. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: November 30, 2003 15:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter keep up the good work and update soon... you keep writing I'll keep reading..TTFN
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2003 14:31 CST
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Hehehe, the Trent scene was funny. I loved the remark about the ferret :D Heero's characterisation here was well done and interesting, gave him extra dimension. Hoping to read next chapter soon!
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2003 01:07 CST
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Awwww, they're in luuuv, that's so cute =-_-= pity about the massive secrets hanging above both their heads. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: November 20, 2003 19:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is really,really,really,really good and I can't wait to here more so please update again soon...TTFN
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2003 13:37 CST
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'He was *bigger* than them for god's sake, that alone should be enough reason for them to do what he told them to' That whole paragraph had me chortling. Heero and kids, that situation just had to be amusing! As ever waiting impatiently for more...
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: November 13, 2003 19:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this chapter .I like the way Heero is like a real person in this story.He talks instead of just making noises.. And Duo would make a good dad.. till next time TTFN
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Reviewed By: Destiny's Lot [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2003 01:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the way you twisted the story. Great job. Update soon. Ja ne
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: November 06, 2003 21:22 CST
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Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Wow I just love this story ...It just keeps geting better and better with every chapter... and I will read every one.. so please keep writing so I can keep reading ..Please update soon.. TTFN
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2003 20:48 CST
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'Mr. Yuy wasn't perfect by a long shot' LOL! Kids can be so cruel...well, looks like Heero and Duo are hitting it off, and the plotlines are twining together nicely. More please!
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: November 01, 2003 20:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Perfict I justy love this story and I look foward to reading more ...Please Update Again soon...
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