| "Kindergarten Heero" Reviews/Comments [ 40 ] |
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Reviewed By: theaprilbaby [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2007 05:58 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This has an outstanding cliffhanger, and you haven't updated in forever! Haha. I hope you plan on continuing this fic, it'd be nice to know what happens. You have a great writing style, and it's completely absorbing to read it. :)
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Title: Chapters 1-17
Reviewed By: HopelesslyEscaflowne [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2007 18:42 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a GREAT story and I truly hope you intend to finish it. Your plot is flawless and believable, not to mention enjoyable to read. Heero and the kids were amusing and I love how it was because he pretended to be a teacher that he met Duo. ^^ I'm sure Duo is happy about that too. ;) hehe The only thing that worries me is that you haven't updated in quite some time. You are a talented author and I hope you continue to write. Hope to see an update soon!
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: September 13, 2005 13:54 CDT
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: September 13, 2005 13:49 CDT Rating(s): Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I wish I could write more but I'm in a hurry.My Mom is sick and I have to go stay with her ..So I'm doing a mass review and I'm sorry if this is posted in more than 1 chapter of your story, But like I said I am in a hurry ...I have read your story or story' and enjoyed It or them and can't wait till your next update. So Please update again soon so I can read more...
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Reviewed By: Destinys lot On: October 29, 2004 02:29 CDT
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Yeah yeah!! Again, again!... to much teletubies *sigh* Good chapter, up date soon. Ja ne
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Reviewed By: Raiven On: October 15, 2004 13:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think I'm in love!! First this is a great story. I'm liking all the little details you give. I'm hoping that Treize doesn't get his dirty little hands on cute little Helen. Does Heero win Duo's Trust later on and does Heero relocate to that little town? On a side note I like Lady Une as a Principal it fits her very well. I hope that Trowa and Quatre make a longer apperance in the next chapters. I hope you post another chapter really I'm looking forward to it very much (*looks at long review* mumbles to self::yep i think they can tell::) Any way good luck with anything else you write cause if it is as good as this one you'll be alright. Raiven
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: October 14, 2004 16:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great please update I really, really mean it...
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Reviewed By: Destinys lot On: September 01, 2004 01:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohhh update update. I just saw kindergarden cop on TV and remember this story. So glad to see you added more chapters but please update again soon. Ja ne
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Reviewed By: Dannee-san On: July 16, 2004 15:28 CDT
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Hi! I've read many of your stories, and so far reviewed none of them, I didn't get around to it, but I figured this story did at least merrit one. At first, your story started as a retelling of Kindergarden cop. A funny subject, but not all that original. However, I was most pleased to find that, while reading it, the story became more and more distinctly yours. The characters' description and everything became more and more your story, deviating from the movie you based it on. I hope you keep up this change and write your own story, instead of me unwantingly picturing Arnold Schwarzenegger under the name of Heero Yuy. Continue this new avenue, please. It will only benefit the story.
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Reviewed By: Onee-sama ^__^ On: July 13, 2004 11:27 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
... man... this is much better than kindergarten cop... I need more!!!! update soon!! please?!?
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: July 12, 2004 22:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Rating(s): Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I know this review should be longer ..But I'm really in a hurry ,So I'll just say I red this chapter and really liked it and please update again soon so I can read more...Thank you for updating...
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: June 14, 2004 19:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this chapter and would like to write a longer review to tell you how great this story is..But I can't because I have to go lie down with my daughter .. She is not feeling well,so I'll just say please update again soon. Oh my daughter Jillian who is 16teen said she likes your story to..or also...I red your story to her to help her feel better..
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Title: aRGH!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: rikasakuraduo-heerosyliaspike [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2004 07:34 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DARN YOU FOR THE CLIFFHANGERS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!ARGH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Fire of phoenix On: June 14, 2004 01:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn you. Stupid cliff hangers......
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: May 25, 2004 11:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is great ..Please update again soon.. Keep up the wonderful writing...
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: March 28, 2004 12:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so glad you updated... This is a great story and I look forward to reading more...TTFN
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