| "Kindergarten Heero" Reviews/Comments [ 40 ] |
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: November 13, 2003 19:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this chapter .I like the way Heero is like a real person in this story.He talks instead of just making noises.. And Duo would make a good dad.. till next time TTFN
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Reviewed By: Destiny's Lot [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2003 01:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the way you twisted the story. Great job. Update soon. Ja ne
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: November 06, 2003 21:22 CST
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Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Wow I just love this story ...It just keeps geting better and better with every chapter... and I will read every one.. so please keep writing so I can keep reading ..Please update soon.. TTFN
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2003 20:48 CST
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'Mr. Yuy wasn't perfect by a long shot' LOL! Kids can be so cruel...well, looks like Heero and Duo are hitting it off, and the plotlines are twining together nicely. More please!
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: November 01, 2003 20:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Perfict I justy love this story and I look foward to reading more ...Please Update Again soon...
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Reviewed By: MaldororUnlogged On: November 01, 2003 19:43 CST
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Funny :) Heero and kids, that just had to spell disaster. Now I guess we get to see more of Duo's character, that will be cool.
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: October 24, 2003 01:37 CDT
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Rating(s): Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: This was a really good update.. And this story is comming along so good. This story gets better and better with every chapter you post.. I look forward to reading every chapter and can't wait until the next update so update again soon thanks. TTFN
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2003 23:44 CDT
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Fun and very readable :) I'll keep my eyes pealed for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2003 11:43 CDT
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Nice chapter! Keep it up! I hope Heero doesn't use the scowl o' death on the kids, they'd probabaly all start crying at once...might be tempting though...
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Reviewed By: Lorna On: October 19, 2003 07:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hehehe thats great! i love that movie lol and your doing a wonderful job of writing it out like that! please write some more
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: October 19, 2003 01:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dam this is a good story LOL.. and I can't stop...LOL Poor Heero...update soon TTFN
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Reviewed By: Momma Cat [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2003 23:05 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
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I have seen Kidergarten Cop and I think the idea is cute, but (dan dan daaa) maybe too much of the movie is in the fic. I hope your add in more of your own ideas. Keep going.
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Reviewed By: MaldororUnlogged On: October 11, 2003 13:08 CDT
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I don't know the film so I don't know what's coming out of your own inventive mind (I read Fragments...) and what's coming from the film, but it reads smooth and easy, with good vocabulary and funny scenes. I'll keep an eye open for the next chapter!
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Title: GREAT
Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: October 10, 2003 18:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this please keep going ...I can't wait to see how Heero and Duo meet...
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2003 10:43 CDT
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Well I haven't seen Kindergarten Cop but this fic shows promise. I'll be reading the next chapter with interest.
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