| "Happy Birthday Yugi!" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Title: Yo Mamma
Reviewed By: flipzee On: July 06, 2005 20:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't think it was very good because you used the same words in a sentence over and over again. you've made it clear that yugi is in his room sitting on his bed or somthing like that. and what the heck with the talking in the middle of the stroy? I HAD NO STINKIN' CLUE WHAT THE HECK I WAS READING HALF THE TIME!!
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Title: yuig love yami?!!
Reviewed By: digigirl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2003 13:10 CST
Comment/Review:
ok..........what yuig love yami? I like it but the part with YIUG like yami was.....not what I expected (I thing that the right spelling)OH YEAH CAN YOU READ 'STAR SEED DIGIVOLE' AND ANY OTHER STORY!!!!!!!!!!!THANKS ^_^
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