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Title: Whoa...
Reviewed By: Bombayoni [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2005 14:27 EDT
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So, you've got a problem with not letting the baby just come early and give them a break? i think it could survive on its own by now... right?
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: June 25, 2005 19:42 EDT
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: June 25, 2005 18:39 CDT Rating(s): Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: This story is the best,thank you for updating so fast...Please update again soon...:,)
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Reviewed By: kimpisces(not signed in) On: June 25, 2005 16:39 EDT
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Awwww the baby's sooo cute already ^-^ LOL I can't wait to see it born and I agree that once the baby's born, their maternal instincts will kick in and nurse brown has nothing to worry about...Heero will probably be the most loving father ever (after he gets over 'i'm going to hurt the baby' thing i talked about in an earlier review)...can't wait to see the baby ...how much longer now? Update soon *huggles* ~KIM~
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Title: MORE!!!!
Reviewed By: Bombayoni [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2005 00:24 EDT
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Update soon, ShenLong!
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2005 23:33 EDT
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These "training" chapters remind me of Three Men And A Baby and how totally clueless the guys were at first, but how they quickly learned how to take care of the little bundle of joy. I don't think any amount of practice will prepare them for the moment they actually get to hold Sunshine, and feed/change/bathe the infant for real. I wonder how those trigger-reflexes are going to like all the cute little squeaks and grunts babies make through the night? The guys are pretty used to injuries, so I guess the umbilical cord "remains" won't bother them, huh? Even when they have to clean it? I'm so looking forward to the baby's arrival!
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2005 07:29 EDT
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Yay! no. 100! This is a wonderful fic. Very realistic and detailed with parenthood. Makes me *not* want children anytime soon. It seems so much more complicated when its formed into words. Good thing I never had to bathe a baby or use those clothed diapers. I (nor the baby)wouldn't have made it. UPdate soon and I look forward to what other torture...uh..I mean lessons Heero and Duo have to go through.
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Title: continuation of last review...
Reviewed By: Kimpisces [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2005 09:25 EDT
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Basically I thought of something to add after I pushed "submit" ....I agree with priscel, once it's a real baby I think it'll be a lot easier for them. I mean, they're not going to make as many dumb mistakes because they'll care about the baby so much ...yes that's about it....~KIM~
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Reviewed By: Kimpisces [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2005 09:22 EDT
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Yeah, it's the hundredth chapter!!! Yeah!!! LOL Maybe they really should invest in a nanny, it might make things a lot easier for them because then they wouldn't have to worry about things. Then again, I can't see Duo or Heero willing to leave their baby's life in someone else's hands so I don't think that may happen, not unless they were sure it was the only way to keep their baby from certain death (and I personally don't think that Duo and Heero are that bad!) Anyways update soon ^-^ I'll be waiting ~KIM~
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Title: 100!!!
Reviewed By: ChessyKat [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2005 00:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just wanted to congradulate you on your 100th chapter. What a funny chapter it is too. "Heero was wondering if it wouldn't be safer, not to mention cheaper, to simply put the child into a cage or restraints of sorts once it got to the mobility stage. Somehow though he thought his suggestion might offend the nurse so he kept his thoughts to himself." LOL my parents put me on a kiddie leash when we were in public.
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Reviewed By: priscel---- On: June 10, 2005 04:38 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ch.98-9.... *huggles Shenlong* I sorry I just love this story!! *gives Shen a cookie* i thought the 'got milk' comment heero made was funny as hell but shoot I didn't expect for Duo to faint. So Sally's giving him pills to keep the hormone levels low but once he stops and the baby's born, whose to say that the levels won't drop off because of the pills? will she give him more pills to raise the levels so that he can fed their baby? Man heero broke the baby's ankle! maybe on their next training session duo should tell him that he should be as gentle with the baby as he is with him, but a bit more gentle. *did i use that word enough* It may also be that they aren't working on a real baby and that's why Heero is doing things too tightly because of the lack of response to his actions, he couldn't tell he was doing it right. When the baby is born, I think he do better. Can't wait for more!!!
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: June 05, 2005 19:15 EDT
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Cute and funny! Keep up the great job!
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Reviewed By: Kimpisces [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2005 17:35 EDT
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Poor Heero isn't going to want to touch his kid when it's born if this keeps up. I mean, seriously, if he continues this way he's going to be terrified to touch his own kid. I mean, I know that I would be terrified anyways but already knowing that you might hurt it, that's gonna be bad. Heero's going to be that dad who just watches and refuses to hold the baby because he's scared, isn't he? *shakes her head* that sucks! oh well,how many more chapters before we get to see little sunshine? I can't wait hehehehe Update soon ^_^ ~KIM~
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Title: lol
Reviewed By: Yukiko unlog On: June 04, 2005 14:22 EDT
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just a comments about diapers. It exist some re-usable with pression buttons on the sides. It's good for younger children who don't know how to 'pop' buttons yet. maybe they should use it, ne ?
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Title: this history has me stingy... :-P
Reviewed By: Pampers-KND On: June 02, 2005 23:10 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this history has me stingy... It is EXCELLENT!!! he had read it .. only the beginning in another part (fanfiction.net), but only the beginning ... and it could not have continued her, for not being able to connect oneself, but after almost I fell down.... XDD you were doing her it completes in another place of fanfiction. It continues. you're a very good writer...
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Reviewed By: Tetsumi(not logged in) On: May 27, 2005 11:21 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update soon!
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