| "Chimaera" Reviews/Comments [ 580 ] |
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Reviewed By: ~Shu-chan~ On: November 11, 2003 18:13 EST
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Another good chapter! I hope the two boys patch things up! I can't wait to see chapter 6!
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Reviewed By: Rurouni Lilouani [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2003 21:17 EST
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AHHHHHH!! You can't end the chapter there!! LOL!! This is such a great story; and definitely original. I like where the plot is going, and how you have organized it. Props for having my favorite quality: VERISIMILITUDE!! The only thing in this fic I can honestly critique, is the characterization. There are just a couple of places where it goes OOC. For example: Dr. G was-- in my opinion-- wwwwaaaaaayy too *caring.* Even though techniqually the docters are not evil at all, there not a bunch of softies either; especially considering what they put the G-boys through. You must admit they each have there frightening qualities. I've always seen Dr. G as the most cynical of the Doctors. Therefore it was weird to see him act in that manner. Overall, your is great though. Keep up the good work, and UPDATE SOON!! ~And so the Rurouni wanders off~
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Reviewed By: me On: November 08, 2003 15:56 EST
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nice fic. i really like it, please update again soon. = )
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Title: Cool story
Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: November 08, 2003 13:54 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so glad you updated because I love this story... Heero is going to talk toDuo and then they will get togather ...I just love that ..I also can not wait till the next update and look foward to reading it so I hope you update soon....so until then TTFN
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2003 10:38 EST
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Well-written and emotionally strong. Hm. I know this because I was mentally shouting 'Get it together, gah, no don't think THAT, you're wrong, Heero! gaaah!' at the screen during the whole chapter. *Coughs and blushes* Ah, now the reunion! Can't wait...
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Title: How could you stop it there?!?!!?
Reviewed By: aka: Shadow_Kat On: November 08, 2003 08:31 EST
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I cannot believe that you just stopped right there...right there in the best part! OMG you are a cruel person. I am really enjoying this, it's got an appeal that cannot be denied. I think alot of it is because you are giving sufficient background information that correlates to the series but also fills in some of the blanks with "could have been" info. Then there is the MPREG that you keep dangling in front of us like a tastey little morsel, but it's only enough to keep us reading more. I can't wait to see how that is going to unfold...although I wish it were soon. I am not one for waiting :P I noticed that in the earlier chapters you went back and forth between perspective but in the last two you dealt with them seperately which makes perfect sense since they were "apart" and I liked it. Most authors that try that little feat leave leave me rather confused but I must say you pulled it off rather nicely. Please continue and the sooner the better in my opinion...but you know what they say about opinions! :) Opinions are like assholes, everyone has one and they all stink
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Title: PATTY 40
Reviewed By: PATTY 40 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2003 23:05 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wOW THIS IS A GREAT STORE .i CAN'T WAIT TO READ MOER SO PLEASE UPDATE SOON...
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Reviewed By: Devil1 On: November 03, 2003 15:08 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor of they, well I's enjoy this chapter and the others, congratulations.
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2003 12:52 EST
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Gah! You evil person you! You torture us with an excellent chapter full of raw emotion (sniffle) and then you leave us on a cliffhanger? Boiling oil time. Unless you produce the next chapter pronto. Once more, the facts from the anime are well integrated into the storyline, and it all hangs well together!
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Reviewed By: Denise Dee On: November 01, 2003 07:11 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi! Mpreg is a really difficult subject to write about, I mean is hard to write something believable about it. But you did!!! The story is great, the idea of Duo having his period..Oh my!!! I am your fan and love everything you write!!! Thank you very much for this wonderful story!!! Kisu, Dee
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: October 29, 2003 16:42 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Oh the "occasional bleeding" is amazing. I like what you did with it. I mean wow! I love this fic. I love how everything just flows in the development of the plot. Keep up the awesome job and update soon.
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2003 12:40 EST
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Ahh, that day of the month, groan...Good chapter, I like the slowly building relation between the two, it's realistic, and very sweet :) The bits of the gw anime you weave in keep this fresh and interesting as well. I'll keep my eyes peeled for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: October 24, 2003 13:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love this story!
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2003 12:25 EDT
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Excellent second chapter, even better than the first, since now the story can slow down a bit and we can get to know the characters better. They both ring true, especially Heero who can be hard to write. Hope you update soon!
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: October 14, 2003 21:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this fic. I also like how you have used some parts of the series worked into your story. Keep up the awesome job.
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