| "Chimaera" Reviews/Comments [ 580 ] |
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Reviewed By: Devona Wolfe. On: March 02, 2004 13:12 EST
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YAY! Finally they know! They're unconcious, but they know! ^_^ I think they'll make great parents! Thanks for the update! Update again soon please!
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2004 12:22 EST
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ROFLMAO! Okay that was classic. Yeah,they took that as well as could be expected. Actually Heero's reaction might be pretty accurate, especially after the tension of the past few days. He may deal with battle and death but he's the kind who would react a bit, er, violently to something coming from the opposite direction. LOL! Personally I'd have fainted long before Duo so kudos to him... Excellent chapter, and now (once the boys have revived, heheh) the details...can't wait!
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Reviewed By: Bloodywingz On: March 02, 2004 11:30 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Bravo! Would have loved to see Heero faint for real. Congratulations on your new granddaughter.
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Reviewed By: Devona Wolfe... On: March 01, 2004 04:38 EST
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Great update, thanks a lot, I can't wait for more! ^_^
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Title: chapter 32
Reviewed By: Enna Namo [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2004 02:56 EST
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Dr. G. should be careful with what he is saying. sooner or later Heero would find out about Duo's pregnancy. And how would Dr. G. explain them, that Duo has to be operated a second time without telling them that it is to remove the baby and the womb? OH, and he shouldn't even think that the baby isn't Heero's. Very bad for your health, I'd say, lol. On the other side, Heero acts like an overprotective boyfriend at the moment, what will he be like once he gets to know that Duo is pregnant and that he is going to be a daddy? And what will Wufei say? lol
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: February 29, 2004 15:05 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope they tell Heero and Duo about the baby in the next chapter..!!! This waiting is killing me.. God please don't let G do anything to hert Duo and the baby!!! Thank god sally is on the babys side and will protect it... Ok we need longer chapters please because I just love this story... So please update again soon ...
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Reviewed By: Rurouni Lilouani [MediaMiner Member] On: February 29, 2004 13:14 EST
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*Jumps up and Down* Go Sally!!! You tell dat son of a mother Dr. G!!! Hee! Hee! ^_^ I can't wait for the next chapter!! Please update soon!!! ~Wanders off chasing G with a Bazooka~ ^_______^
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Reviewed By: Maldoror_unlogged On: February 29, 2004 10:27 EST
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Go Sally! I just hope G doesn't try anything funny, or manage to turn Sally from her current opinion. I have a feeling of faint menace hanging around...Next chapter please!
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Reviewed By: Devina On: February 27, 2004 12:37 EST
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oh dear, dont think that G saw that cumming..MWUHAHAHAHAHAHAHA take that monkey-man anyhow i luved the chap hun dont wait to long for the next ne?!
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Reviewed By: Kix [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2004 05:30 EST
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DUM DUM DUM!!!!!! whoohoo...looks good..keep going girlfriend
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Reviewed By: Turtle_fire On: February 26, 2004 01:24 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the most beliveable mpreg fic I have ever read. It is so skillfully and tastefully done. I absolutely love it! The "battle" between Duo and Wufei is very interesting, and hopefully Duo will win in the end!
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Reviewed By: Devona Wolfe! On: February 26, 2004 00:50 EST
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Thanks for the update, i look forward to more soon! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Sally Po On: February 25, 2004 22:07 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! I absolutely love this fic. I have your story on autonotify for when you update and i check everyday hopeing you updated. ^^; Please PLEASE write more. and maybe make the chapters longer??? The chapters end so quickly. ^^;;;; LOVE THE FIC! ABSOLUTELY WONDERFUL.
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: February 25, 2004 15:54 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update,update,update,update,update,update,update, update,update,update, Please thank you
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: February 25, 2004 15:52 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope Dr. G doesn't try to abort the baby ...I hope Sally tells Heero and Duo about the baby before that happens... Duo needs to keep his baby...
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