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Title: Chapter 41
Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2004 00:42 EDT
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My daughter had something close to an RH problem and had to have blood tests every week for her first two months of life. You did a good job of capturing the fear of the unknown as the boys waited for the test results. Nurse Brown is great! I think she could fill in for the mother neither Heero nor Duo remember. Poor Heero is going to collapse if he doesn't take a break soon. Understandably, there's lots for him to do, but there are some things that his friends could have helped him with, like pack and unpack. Is that a premonition Heero had at the end of this chapter? :(
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: May 01, 2004 22:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm trying so hard to come up with the best review... Because this is one of the best stories I have red in a long time, and I wanted to give it the best review I could!!! SO here goes, "this story is fantastic, it is the best ..."I love the way Heero tries to take care of Duo and the way Duo screws with Wufei... I can't wait till Qarte and Trowa show up ..!!! I give this story 2 thumbs up, and not just want, but need to read more of this story ... Ok I guess that's all I have to say for this review except please update soon..^_~
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Reviewed By: shinimegami82 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2004 18:37 EDT
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Yay! Duo's going to be leaving the hospital and going home with Heero. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: AnimeDuneJediElf [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2004 14:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I soo hope that Duo and the baby will be alright. Update soon! *|Mari|*
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: April 28, 2004 13:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was damn good!! I loved it! You are very expressive and brilliant.. write another chapter soon...
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Reviewed By: shinimegami82 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2004 18:19 EDT
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I hope Duo and the baby will be okay. I can't wait for Duo to actually have the baby. A little version of both Heero and Duo would be so cute to see. I'm glad you've been writing these chapters so quickly. Can't wait for another chapter.
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2004 13:47 EDT
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YO! (snickers) heero teasing Duo, how KAWAII! hmm coffee, I know that it doesn't hurt for pregnant peeps to have some, but please no more coffee.
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Reviewed By: Shaeric Draconis [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2004 03:27 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent
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Reviewed By: shinimegami82 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2004 03:12 EDT
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This is really, super great. I can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: April 21, 2004 20:35 EDT
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Rating(s): Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Thank you so much for updateing ..I so love this story and look forward to each and every update ...So please update again really soon...@_@
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: April 18, 2004 18:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just love this story and cant wait till your next update so please update again soon...^_~
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Reviewed By: AnimeDuneJediElf [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2004 20:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've always thought of Duo as the female in the relationship, so it came as no surprise that he was the one that got pregnant ^_~ and I just can't wait to see the rest of the pregnancy! Update soon! ^_^ *|Mari|*
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Reviewed By: shinimegami82 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2004 14:49 EDT
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Whoo-hoo! Another chapter! It was good...I didn't see any errors. There could have been but I didn't really see any. Well, I can't wait for the next chapter. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2004 13:38 EDT
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(bounces happily in chair) Wahooo! another great chap.! gee.. I think i'm becoming more attached to the computer... hmmm I dunno what's up with me but I'm supicious of G, I don't like him. I just hope he's sincere. All his adment talk earlier about killing Heero and Duo's baby made me wanna bop'im hard. It's strange he's all of sudden "I need to somehow make it up to Duo for all the shit ..." hmm he might be sincere but I'll keep a dagger handy. I'm so SO glad G doesn't know the location of the house they'll be living in.
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Reviewed By: Ima On: April 07, 2004 16:01 EDT
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I really like it. Parts of it made me blush because It's so uncanny that it's true. You know what I'm saying? It's strange, but interesting. Please keep writting. I'll keep reading.
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