| "Chimaera" Reviews/Comments [ 580 ] |
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Reviewed By: AnimeDuneJediElf [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2004 23:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, at least Hilde didn't faint and that was so sweet of her to ask Duo to give her away. Great couple of chapters! *|Mari|*
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Reviewed By: shinimegami82 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2004 01:17 EDT
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Ooh, I can't wait till you write more. Oh, I didn't know what a Crunchie bar was until I found one. I've had stuff that's like Crunchie bars but I didn't know that was the same thing. I found them at the Sweets from Heaven store. I'm here in the US so I had no idea Crunchie bars were even here. I was shocked to find them but I cought a couple. They're really yummy. ^_^
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Title: Crunchie
Reviewed By: rosedreams [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2004 19:56 EDT
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Just wanted to say that I took your advice and bought some crunchie bars... Yummy. Had to go on the net to Amazon.com and they're $1.30 plus shipping.
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: June 21, 2004 18:26 EDT
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Rating(s): Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Ahh I really enjoyed this chapter..Please update again soon...^_~
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: June 20, 2004 19:02 EDT
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The last comment was really funny. Update soon and keep up the great job.
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Reviewed By: lucinda_sarah On: June 20, 2004 10:36 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well i have to say you definetly are a responsible person 50 chapters and still going this is probably one of the few fics that are this long ! I think the one thing that may well improve it would be more excitement i kow you have written many fics cause i recognised your nick at the first sight seen it somewhere! Pls this is just my point of view so don't be upset but keep it going and coming =)
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: June 16, 2004 22:04 EDT
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Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I know I said this ready ,But I have to say it again...Sorry I really wish this review can or could be longer .... But my daughter is still sick so I only have a minute to check my mail ,So I'll say I love this story and your a great writer and please update again soon ...Please give to the epilepsy foundation so children like my daughter (Jillian)can live longer...I hope I don't in trouble for the epilepsy thing...
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: June 16, 2004 18:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really wish this review can or could be longer .... But my daughter is still sick so I only have a minute to check my mail ,So I'll say I love this story and your a great writer and please update again soon ...Please give to the epilepsy foundation so children like my daughter (Jillian)can live longer...I hope I don't in trouble for the epilepsy thing...
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Title: Ohhh
Reviewed By: Terry Maxwell On: June 16, 2004 03:38 EDT
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Well that was a diferent reaction... hahaha variety... i want to see Heero and Duo shopping time... n_n kisses and hugs
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2004 23:29 EDT
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Hilde's reaction is a tad... odd. I only hope it's a positive one and not due to something like an inability for her to get pregnant. So Duo's almost made it through the first trimester. Woo hoo! BTW, I love his little 'emotional' spells. :)
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Reviewed By: shinimegami82 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2004 23:16 EDT
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Well, at least Hilde didn't faint. LOL I loved this chapter and I can't wait for the next one.
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Reviewed By: Shaeric Draconis [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2004 18:08 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love this story, excellent chapter. You know how to keep us wanting more; great writer does anyway. This is one of my favourite stories and I'm only sorry I haven't reviewed more. Look forward to the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: elito51 On: June 11, 2004 15:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi! I really enjoy reading this fic. It has made me laugh and cry. You're very good at this. I only have one little complaint. I mean it's been 48 chapters, 48!, and Duo is just 2 months pregnant. This makes me wonder how many chapters are going to be until the baby is born? But this is a very good fic and it worths the wait. Thank you. Bye.
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Reviewed By: Kix [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2004 23:05 EDT
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Yeay! Aunt Hildy makes an apperance!@@!
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: June 04, 2004 20:09 EDT
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: June 04, 2004 19:47 EDT Rating(s): Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Guess what I'm gonna say? ::wicked grin:: WRITE MORE WRITE MORE WRITE MORE WRITE MORE! This is brilliant! and yeah, , I love your story, you have to keep it going! AH! really want more!I have written so many reviews I don't know what to say anymore except please update again
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