| "Chimaera" Reviews/Comments [ 580 ] |
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Reviewed By: priscel ---(@_@)---- [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2004 19:50 EDT
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*sighs in relief* but there still could be a bit of a complication, maybe he still needs to be on thoses iron pills? Oi thank you for such a quick update *hugs shenlong* you are so kind to not lengthen our suffering by making us wait.
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Reviewed By: Weissangel24 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2004 15:17 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! How can you end it there!? Please hurry and update soon! I can't stand the suspence! This is an awesome fic! ^-^ Weissangel24
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: August 09, 2004 15:37 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well How can you do that,(indigent look)A cliff hanger and there might be something wrong with Duo and The baby...How can you that to us? to them?I can't believe you..@_@ Please don't let Duo's baby die......
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Reviewed By: fujinakaheero (not signed in) On: August 08, 2004 20:59 EDT
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you left it as a cliffie... why?!?! You must update... I must know what has happened to poor Duo... *sighs* this story is really really good, the plot line for it is more original thans others. So now i must say... update soon! You just had to leave it when things got good... v.v poor Duo... Poor Hee-chan... what r they goona do!!! Dun Dun Dun ddduuuunnnnn.... okay im done now. JA Ne! Fujinakaheero
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Reviewed By: priscel *gasps* On: August 08, 2004 17:20 EDT
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Ile!!! *gasps* man please update soon! oh man oh man! Duo!
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Reviewed By: Ni-san On: August 08, 2004 13:23 EDT
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HOW COULD STOP THERE? AAAHHHHHHHHHH!!! Thanks for updating and I can't wait to find out what happens to Duo and what could be the problem with him...ja ne
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Reviewed By: priscel *blinks* On: July 29, 2004 05:38 EDT
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*slowly a smile dawns on her face until she beams with happiness* Man I need to stop with the cheesin' huh? well i had no really comments just sharing the smile you update and chapter brought. (^_^)
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Reviewed By: Kix [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2004 02:59 EDT
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btw...Down with Bush!! Suport Same Sex Marages!
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Reviewed By: Kix [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2004 02:57 EDT
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*sighs and looks at hubby poo and calls out* Lover...i wana have a baby *hubby poo roles his eyes and drags Kix by the hair to bed* eeeekk..night night all it's 3am...know where your condoms are??
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: July 27, 2004 21:23 EDT
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All in all that was a cute chapter. Keep up the good job and update soon.
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: July 27, 2004 14:19 EDT
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Rating(s): Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: That was cool really,really cool..I really enjoyed reading that!!!!Your stories and chaptres just keep geting better and better..I really like this story...
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: Terry Maxwell On: July 25, 2004 19:00 EDT
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another chapter i like purple... very light... i just love it... so its just and opinion.. yellow really dont... and i heard that you must put yellow clothes to a newborn baby... for good luck... see ya... my favorite MPREG fic...
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: July 22, 2004 23:03 EDT
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Rating(s): Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I've been gone so I'm reading all these stories at one time so I'm doing a mass review...By the time I read and review all the stories you will have updated again .. But I want you to know I have read everyone's last chapter and enjoyed it...:) and cant wait until your next update!!!We went to Winnsboro,TX so I'm kinda behind on my stories and my reviews...But I will get caught up..And I can't wait to read more...So until next time ,If you keep writing I'll keep reading...Thank you for updating and keep up the great story telling.....
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Title: Chapter 54
Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2004 01:29 EDT
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Careful now - you're making these two sound better than any expecting couple I've ever met! It's fun watching them deal with Duo's mood swings, and I must admit that I love "Expectant Father Heero." He's learned how to deal with Duo's quick-change personality, I love how he helped Duo out of his slump after Hilde left. I hate that I get choked up right along with Duo whenever he becomes emotional. Nurse Brown is a dear. She seems to be turning into the mother neither boy had. Great job again!
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Title: Cute Hee-chan
Reviewed By: Terry Maxwell On: July 19, 2004 21:02 EDT
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Hey that was a cute mental image... a naked Heero surrounded by bubbles... playing with a rubber duck.. ok i admit it... a rather hot one too... but i love it
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