| "Chimaera" Reviews/Comments [ 580 ] |
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Reviewed By: Tyi Yuy [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2004 17:39 EST
Comment/Review:
why would u stop there!!!!!!!!!!!! that is ssooooooooooooo mean
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Reviewed By: Devona [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2004 17:02 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
kick ass story, still lovin it, thanks for the update! getting that little email that says there's a new chap of your story, just makes me bounce off the walls! hehe! keep up the good work!
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Title: YOU CAN'T JUST END IT LIKE THAT!
Reviewed By: lalallalaal On: February 05, 2004 16:53 EST
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Okay. I'm trying to stay sane but with you teasing me it's not the easiest thing to do. I love what you've done so far and I can't wait to know what's comoing. I can tell you this though...if he loses the baby I will hunt you down! I can't stand the thought of him losing it after all we've gone through...it's just too vindictive! Have mercy on us soft hearted readers and give us what we want...and soon too!
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Reviewed By: Enna Namo [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2004 14:04 EST
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Oh, not good, Duo is injured. Will Sally find out that Duo is pregnant now? I'm afraid Moran is going to regret being born really soon. Oh, you have to update soon.
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Title: yay
Reviewed By: laini1482 On: February 05, 2004 14:02 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i wanted to give you 11 out of 10 but i cant... that was amazing yay more more more
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: February 05, 2004 12:52 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't believe you left it there... You should have rote more ... since your having trouble with the url...I need to know what happens next ...Pleas hurry up and update ..Please......
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2004 11:48 EST
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...so...You got Duo shot (I suppose this is where a doctor is gonna find out something interesting), and Moran is still alive (for another three milliseconds and then Heero is gonna stomp him) and then you go and tell us the next part is gonna be awhile...I see...well, since it's RL and you can't compromise with that, I'll just finish the review first before screaming my head off. Sigh...*whimper*
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Title: Worry
Reviewed By: Terry Maxwell On: February 04, 2004 02:56 EST
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Hey once again wonderfull chapter... but... please tell me that you are not planning in and abortion, i think maybe Duo will get injured and in the medical atention they find the baby ne? i hope the both are well.. love from Terry
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Reviewed By: Rurouni Lilouani [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2004 21:51 EST
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**Nervously Chews Fingernails** OMG! OMG! This is soooo nerve wrackng!! I hope everything turns out okay!!! **Huggles Heero & Duo IMMENSELY** PEEZ!! OOHH!! PEEZZ!! Update soon!!! ~Wanders away worrying about the mission~
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: February 03, 2004 17:18 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please don't let Duo loose the baby...!!! Come on you can't be that cruel? I hope not...I know you are a good person and will let the baby live!!! Please update soon Please...I just love this story...TTFN
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2004 11:40 EST
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Wah! Cliffie! Okay, great action setup, tension climbing, and all, I hope you update soon 'cause I have a feeling things are going to get very hot! Hope nothing happens to the baby (or 'Mom'). On tenterhooks...
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Reviewed By: DuoXHeero all the way On: January 31, 2004 17:51 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
I like this story, but I'm not sure about the last bit with the fetus having feelings... Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: January 31, 2004 17:32 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just love this story and this chapter and look forward to reading more of both... Pleas update soon...
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: January 31, 2004 16:58 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow I just love this lemon and can't wait to read more...Please update again soon...
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Reviewed By: Kix [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2004 01:52 EST
Comment/Review:
eshh...dang Moran..you are a moron...he is gona get his jewl's chopped off..by verry angry Heero i bet..Keep writing babe!
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