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Reviewed By: black beauty On: November 20, 2003 20:06 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Oh! This is so cool. Heero will be working with Duo. I can't wait to read more, keep up the good job and update soon.
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: November 20, 2003 19:55 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow and I mean wow this is a great chapter.. At least Duo and Heero are talking .. And Hilde is one mean bitch cool... Heero beter shape up or ship out ..Well I want to here more sooo please update again soon please...TTFN
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Reviewed By: ens On: November 20, 2003 19:20 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very very good.... funny, too at times... i love, i need, i must have more... need more chapters to survive.. please update soon soon soon!
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2003 11:36 EST
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'the crankiness usually disappeared after a day or two, even quicker if Duo had something to go and blow up'. Yeah, that's the Duo we know and love! Man, the thought of a hormonal Duo is enough to send shivers up the spine...Super chapter, but enough of putting the poor guys through the wringer already! Let's have a bit of happy time!
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: November 14, 2003 17:46 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so glad you updated.... I just love this story .. I can't wait for Duo to become pregnant and to see Heero's reaction that is going to be good .So you know I will keep reading this story so I can find out .Please update soon Because I can't wait to here more ... thanks for the update ... update again soon TTFN
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Reviewed By: Rurouni Lilouani [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2003 17:15 EST
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AWWW!!! That was too sweet!! Nicely handled!! Nothing cliche about it either!! **Squeals & Glomps Heero and Duo** Hee!! Hee!! ^____^ Can't wait for the next chapter. ~Wanders after Duo & Heero who run in terror of being glomped~
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: November 14, 2003 15:59 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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So they decided to slowly build a relationship again. I can't wait to read more. Update soon and keep up the GREAT job.
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Reviewed By: ~Shu-chan~ On: November 14, 2003 13:25 EST
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Another good chapter. ^_^ I can't wait to see what Hilde has to say to Heero. So warming, indeed. ^^ keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2003 01:56 EST
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Ah, they got it sorted. That's so cute! I feel warm and fuzzy now. Take your time with the whole mpreg thing, don't let anyone rush you or this story, it will be all the more rewarding if it develops naturally and at its own pace.
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Reviewed By: Shen [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2003 01:35 EST
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Many thanks to all of you who have reviewed this fic so far. I'm glad you are enjoying it, I'm having a great time writing it. I apologise for the delay in-between updates but RL is kind of hectic. Just a quick note... the pregnancy WILL be happening soon enough but in order for the plot to work the way I have planned out the boy's have a little more to go through first, after all they do need to develop a relationship before taking the next step, after all they have gone through in the war I can't see them just jumping into bed at the first given opportunity, hence the lead up. ~_^ This fic looks set to run for quite a few more chapters yet so I hope you will all stay with me for the ride. Arigato Shen ^_^
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Reviewed By: ~Shu-chan~ On: November 11, 2003 18:13 EST
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Another good chapter! I hope the two boys patch things up! I can't wait to see chapter 6!
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Reviewed By: Rurouni Lilouani [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2003 21:17 EST
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AHHHHHH!! You can't end the chapter there!! LOL!! This is such a great story; and definitely original. I like where the plot is going, and how you have organized it. Props for having my favorite quality: VERISIMILITUDE!! The only thing in this fic I can honestly critique, is the characterization. There are just a couple of places where it goes OOC. For example: Dr. G was-- in my opinion-- wwwwaaaaaayy too *caring.* Even though techniqually the docters are not evil at all, there not a bunch of softies either; especially considering what they put the G-boys through. You must admit they each have there frightening qualities. I've always seen Dr. G as the most cynical of the Doctors. Therefore it was weird to see him act in that manner. Overall, your is great though. Keep up the good work, and UPDATE SOON!! ~And so the Rurouni wanders off~
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Reviewed By: me On: November 08, 2003 15:56 EST
Comment/Review:
nice fic. i really like it, please update again soon. = )
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Title: Cool story
Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: November 08, 2003 13:54 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so glad you updated because I love this story... Heero is going to talk toDuo and then they will get togather ...I just love that ..I also can not wait till the next update and look foward to reading it so I hope you update soon....so until then TTFN
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2003 10:38 EST
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Well-written and emotionally strong. Hm. I know this because I was mentally shouting 'Get it together, gah, no don't think THAT, you're wrong, Heero! gaaah!' at the screen during the whole chapter. *Coughs and blushes* Ah, now the reunion! Can't wait...
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