| "From Friendship to Love" Reviews/Comments [ 296 ] |
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Reviewed By: Jokilla On: November 26, 2003 04:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE THE FUCKING STORY!!!
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Reviewed By: BurningBritelyOne On: November 22, 2003 23:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The idea of Inuyasha being torn between both Kagome and Kikyou, and making Kagome the outsider and Kikyou the popular slut, isn't really that original. However, I think you've made the situation and conditions of the story very creatively. You have some occasionally verb tense and noun gender problems, but overall your writing is very good. I've noticed you've used some foreshadowing and the constant struggles of emotions is so realistic. I really love this story the further and further it gets. I think I figured out who Naraku's oldest daughter is, too, so I'm excited to see how the characters' reactions play out in this. Great job and please update again soon!!
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Reviewed By: Renzokuken [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2003 15:48 CST
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NOOOO!!PLEASE DON'T DO THIS TO ME! I'M GONNA GO INSANE NOW. PLLLEEEEEAAASSEEE WRITE THE NEXT CHAPTER! i'M GONNA DIE! SO UNFAIR. please please please! This is so good. I liek the way the story is going.. Exept for that contract part. Damn inuyasha's nosy father!
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2003 19:10 CST
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I CANNOT BELIVE YOU DID THAT TO INUYASHA!!!!! HOW COULD YOU HAVE HIM SIGN HIS SOUL AWAY TO THE DEVIL(KIKYOU) ARE YOU TRYING TO GIVE ME A HEART ATTACK!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!
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Title: Evil...
Reviewed By: Kibo [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2003 04:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Evil, evil, EVIL!!!! You are SOOO EVIL!!! I stayed up until fucking 4:30 in the morning reading this, having to get up in 3 hours, and you ended it like that! I know you have another chappy coming, but... *sighs, shaking head* Update soon... ...or else... *evil smirk*
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Title: Forking is fun!
Reviewed By: Kibo [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2003 01:29 CST
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I haven't read through all the chappys, but I just had to make a note on the forking! YAY! Forking is fun! My coworkers and I forked our bosses lawn when she turned 40! She found it funny in the end... haha! Yay! Forking!
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Reviewed By: applejacks [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2003 19:25 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Is Kag older than Kikyo-- cuz if so I think I just found Inu's loophole outta the mess he's dug himself in.
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Reviewed By: nightblossomMorgana [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2003 17:44 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
this is getting to be too much. ur fic is awsome!! plz update asap. its got to be one of the best fanfics i've read.
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Reviewed By: saccharine-ish [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2003 15:59 CST
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that was a great chap!!!! btw, that was cruel. jus when it looks like inu and kag can b 2gether soon, he goes and digs himself even deeper!!! (really cruel ya kno) anyway, please update soon
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Reviewed By: ForEvaConfused89 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2003 14:38 CST
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GREAT ff I love it plezzzzzzzzzzzzz update soon I cant wait to c what happens next plezzzzzzzzzz ur driven me crazyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy plezzzzzzzzzzz update soon thanx bye
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Reviewed By: Relix On: November 20, 2003 08:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please finish this soon.. it's so good i can't take it!!! The situation is so tasty.. i wonder how it ends... oh god.. it's so good..
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Reviewed By: Babsie [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2003 07:08 CST
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I I tell you that I hate you for living in that part of the story would you be sad???I don´t think so...You would be laughing of my despair...i´m kidding. :-) I don´t hate you, but I´m really despair...Sesshoumaru have to find something...the bastard Naraku has to be bigamous or something like that.... So pelase, update soon...i don´t beleive my heart can´t take a long wait .
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Title: asap
Reviewed By: adamm On: November 20, 2003 01:19 CST
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i hope that inu can get out of this. that was just a heart stopper when i read that so plz make it come out go for inu and kag.we all dont want to see kik marry inu that would be just sick(i hate the bicth any)so make the story end happy we all like thouse kind of storys.well the story really kicks ass so hurry with the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: zoe hochoy On: November 19, 2003 22:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
i thought itis the best fic ive ever read good job
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Reviewed By: feywitch17 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2003 20:58 CST
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Oh no!!! Is there a happy ending???? I think I just might cry if he ends up with Kikyo. It can't be!!!!! Please say it isn't so! I don't know if I can handle reading the rest if there's no happy ending...*sob* Ok, that's sort of how I feel in a melodramatic sort of way. But you're the author. So do your thing!!!
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