| "My Scary Halloween!" Reviews/Comments [ 37 ] |
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Title: Hey!
Reviewed By: Slywolf9 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2003 23:03 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
heya! sry it took so long for me to review, been REAL busy! eep! wellz, GOOD JOB!!! poor Yash! my poor lil baby! I hope that it's Saya right? well-i hope that she can save Yash, who in turn can save Kagome n her fwens! eep! damn short shadow ghost or spirit thingys! eep! wellz, ne way, good ob! it'll be a shame wen this ends, but i LOOOVE it neway! i'll wait for da next chappie, no worries, just take your time okeez! and-are you still sick? hope you arent hun! take care! -Lani
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Reviewed By: Julie B On: November 18, 2003 10:16 CST
Comment/Review:
She's not really dead, right? Couldn't Saya help somehow? Maybe telling him that it was an illusion? Please update as soon as possible.
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Reviewed By: ME On: November 16, 2003 21:53 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I SO hope you haven't abandoned this fic since halloween is over--I keep checking back to see if you've updated--I love it and I want to know what's going to happen next!! How's Inu going to get in on the action?? will Inu and Kag 'get together'^_~?? will Kagome's friends stop being pests and getting Kag into all sorts of trouble?? I'd like to 'stay tuned' and find out, but.......only if you update!!!! *please*
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Reviewed By: RedHerring [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2003 17:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
her friends names are Eri, Ayumi, and Yuka. hehe.
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Reviewed By: Sary On: October 31, 2003 21:56 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOur story is scary, I am really getting goose bumps. Good job. I undrestand about having phnomonia; I had it 5 years ago when I was in 8th grade. It sucks. I hope you get better!
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Title: Hey!
Reviewed By: Slywolf9 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2003 00:37 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hiyee! ewwwwwwwiiiiieeeee!!!! i also LOATHE ne bugs cept for fireflies, ladybugs, butterflies, n moths! n i have a special vendetta or w/e against roaches! y? dont ask....eek! im sorry that it happened to ya! musta sucked! man.....well, good job! i hope u update soon and that yash is in the next chapter or one after that! i love him thats y..lol. good job n keep it up! -Lani
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Reviewed By: Julie B On: October 30, 2003 23:40 CST
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What will happen next? Where is Inuyasha? Did Souta tell him where she is? Please update as soon as possible.
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Reviewed By: Cattykit On: October 30, 2003 23:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fic! Please continue soon! Oh, and by the way, in words like grateful and beautiful, there's only one 'l' and you should put apostrophes in words like 'I've' and 'won't'. Heh heh, sorry for being such a critic and such. I'm a big spelling and grammar freak. I'll go run off to my corner now... LOL. Also, if you ever want to describe Kagome's friends, I have pictures of them. Yuka has very short hair and Eri has shoulder-length hair and always wears a light colored hairband. I think Ayumi is the one with permed hair. Just a bit of side info. I got this nifty little guide book from Japan. Can't read it, but it has lovely lil pictures! And it only cost five bucks! Wonderful job! ~cattykit~
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Title: Lo
Reviewed By: Slywolf9 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2003 14:56 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hiyee! good chapter! i hope ya get better soon! wow....i feel kinda ashamed for Eri...damn! she couldda just like ran n told da parents or sumting! i mean...ya! dont just let ur lil sister die! i would try, even if it cost me my life! damn...ahh well...poor Eri...stuck in her notemare! eek! well, good job and i just wanna noe how Aiko fell into da water is all.....well, unless ya didnt think of a way, but its all good! again, keep up da good owrk! get better sooon! -Lani
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Reviewed By: Julie B On: October 30, 2003 13:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great! Where is Inuyasha? Will Kagome's miko powers help her? What will her friends say when they see Inuyasha? Please update soon. Especially if you want to finish it for Halloween since it is tomorrow.
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Reviewed By: Golden_Fire_Goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2003 07:29 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice, very nice. I must say using The Ring was a great idea. I saw that movie and I gotta say it scared the living crap out of me. *shivers* Any way this story just keeps getting better!
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Reviewed By: Higurashi Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2003 20:26 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very sacry hope inuyasha helps save them up-date soon
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Title: Lo
Reviewed By: Slywolf9 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2003 18:08 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hiyee! good chapter! and Yuri means lesbian?! shit shit shit shit shit! eheh...gotsa ta change that then...eek! well, good job! glad inu was in this chappie! love that doggie! *tweaks ears* hehe! good job and i hope u update soon! and thanks for telling me Yuri meant lesbian! *damn!* -Lani
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Reviewed By: cutie_pie_2101_1012 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2003 17:55 CST
Comment/Review:
just to tell u kagome's third friend is Ayumi update soon
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Reviewed By: Cryxxy-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2003 21:32 CST
Comment/Review:
The name of Kagome's friend is Ayumi. Just wanted to let you know and great story, especially for halloween.
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