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"My Scary Halloween!" Reviews/Comments [ 37 ]
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 Reviewed By: biglaugher113 [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 09, 2007 12:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
this is a very good story. that old ladys story kinda freaked me out. and to answer you question her name is Ayumi plz update
 Title: The meaning of Yuri
Reviewed By: pinkmoonusagi513 [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 05, 2006 20:15 CST
Comment/Review:
Ok, this is something that I need ot correct for you. Yes yuri does have a connotation for lesbian things in anime/manga but it also means lily. If you were talking about lesbian-ism to a Japanese person in Japanese and they were not a serious otaku they would have NO IDEA what yuri means, in the connotation of a genre. They would think that you are making this reference to a flower. Unless they are extremely involved in the yuri/yaoi genre of anime and manga, which not all Japanese people are, they would not understand yuri. That and male/male realtionships have way less of a taboo in Japan than female/female relationships. Sorry I just had to get that out there. Now back to your fabulous story.
 Reviewed By: Higurashi Kagome [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 19, 2005 17:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
well i'll still keep the story on my favorites waiting for you to return^_^
 Title: ?????????
Reviewed By: unvoicedsigner  On: August 15, 2004 23:56 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
shit that even freaked me out a littel*shivers*and theirs a weird draft in here *looks over shoulder*AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!! P.S i very much imjoyedthe first chapter
 Title: ?????????
Reviewed By: unvoicedsigner  On: August 15, 2004 23:55 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
shit that even freaked me out a littel*shivers*and theirs a weird draft in here *looks over shoulder*AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!! P.S i very much imjoyedthe first chapter
 Reviewed By: buffaholic  On: August 03, 2004 02:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
DAMNIT! i FINALLY found a really good story and now yur not guna update cause its been since november 2003!! this is just frickin amazing, just my damn luck! you really should finish your stories , alot of people are dissapointed
 Title: My Scary Halloween!
Reviewed By: Water_Goddess125 [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 10, 2004 14:40 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Oh come on! It was just getting good hurry and update soon this is one of my favorites!
 Reviewed By: Biganimefan1 [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 23, 2003 21:18 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
wow i have DEEP chills doing summer sults on my spine. this is really chillig. oh and your youkie is spelled youkai. thats all
 Reviewed By: Relix  On: December 16, 2003 06:04 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Finish the story please!
 Title: great story!
Reviewed By: diablos42069 [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 07, 2003 15:39 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I hope you update soon! i wanna see how they all get out, and how they find ayumi if she is in a room that has no doors or windows..... or how inu yasha will realize its not real and get out and find her! amnyways, UPDATE SOON! GREAT GHOST STORRY!!!! arianna
 Title: AHHHHHH!!!!!
Reviewed By: diablos42069 [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 07, 2003 15:06 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
ok, right now, i have just finished chapter 5 and i have to say this..... AAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!! THAT WOULD FREAK ME OUT!!!!!! the one thing i hate the most in this world are bugs (especially spiders) and to tell you the truth, i would rather be burned alive or have someone put a gun to my head and blow my brains away than what ayumi had to go through!!! Don't get me wrong... I've seen my fair share of ghosts and such, but i am not afraid of those things... not as much as BUGS anywyas... that chapter gave me the CREEPS!!!!! i was shivering the whole time!!! I had to tell you. this story is the only story that has ever creeped me out so bad.... ahhhhh! i feel like bugs are crawling in my ears and on my body now... ahhh!!!!.. ok, im gonna keep reading, i just HAD to let that out..... great story by the way! arianna
 Title: Hello
Reviewed By: Slywolf9 [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 23, 2003 16:18 CST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
hey hun! good job! love the way they used ta be! their partnt would be ashamed of them!!! *sigh* eep! id actually die then have to feed on fear! i dont like inflicting pain on others! cept my bro...but newayz! good chapter! i hope ya get some good ideas ta elp ya with this story! i noe its hard...but its good hun! good! well, i hope ya update soon! -Lani
 Reviewed By: Julie B  On: November 22, 2003 22:47 CST
Comment/Review:
What will happen next? What will Saya do? Will she be able to help Kagome, her friends, and Inuyasha? Please update as soon as possible.
 Reviewed By: Snow Godess_Me  On: November 22, 2003 12:12 CST
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is a great story, I really love it! Poor Kagome and Inu, not to mention Kagome's friends those shadow things are just mean! Can't wait to see the next update, hope it's soon! Keep up the good work! Ja Ne
 Title: My Scary Halloween
Reviewed By: Suzuko  On: November 20, 2003 13:41 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hi this is my first time rewiewing this but There is one thing I'd like to make clear. I went on a japanese/english dictionary site and I looked up the word lesbian it is spelled Resubian or Rezu (abbr). The word Yuri is translated into lily all this I got off of this site http://www.freedict.com/onldict/jap.html I love how scary this story is and I don't mean anything negative by what I had put up previously I had just went there because I had thought Yuri meant snow.
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