| "My Scary Halloween!" Reviews/Comments [ 37 ] |
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Reviewed By: Cattykit On: October 30, 2003 23:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fic! Please continue soon! Oh, and by the way, in words like grateful and beautiful, there's only one 'l' and you should put apostrophes in words like 'I've' and 'won't'. Heh heh, sorry for being such a critic and such. I'm a big spelling and grammar freak. I'll go run off to my corner now... LOL. Also, if you ever want to describe Kagome's friends, I have pictures of them. Yuka has very short hair and Eri has shoulder-length hair and always wears a light colored hairband. I think Ayumi is the one with permed hair. Just a bit of side info. I got this nifty little guide book from Japan. Can't read it, but it has lovely lil pictures! And it only cost five bucks! Wonderful job! ~cattykit~
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Title: Lo
Reviewed By: Slywolf9 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2003 14:56 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hiyee! good chapter! i hope ya get better soon! wow....i feel kinda ashamed for Eri...damn! she couldda just like ran n told da parents or sumting! i mean...ya! dont just let ur lil sister die! i would try, even if it cost me my life! damn...ahh well...poor Eri...stuck in her notemare! eek! well, good job and i just wanna noe how Aiko fell into da water is all.....well, unless ya didnt think of a way, but its all good! again, keep up da good owrk! get better sooon! -Lani
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Reviewed By: Julie B On: October 30, 2003 13:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great! Where is Inuyasha? Will Kagome's miko powers help her? What will her friends say when they see Inuyasha? Please update soon. Especially if you want to finish it for Halloween since it is tomorrow.
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Reviewed By: Golden_Fire_Goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2003 07:29 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice, very nice. I must say using The Ring was a great idea. I saw that movie and I gotta say it scared the living crap out of me. *shivers* Any way this story just keeps getting better!
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Reviewed By: Higurashi Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2003 20:26 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very sacry hope inuyasha helps save them up-date soon
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Title: Lo
Reviewed By: Slywolf9 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2003 18:08 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hiyee! good chapter! and Yuri means lesbian?! shit shit shit shit shit! eheh...gotsa ta change that then...eek! well, good job! glad inu was in this chappie! love that doggie! *tweaks ears* hehe! good job and i hope u update soon! and thanks for telling me Yuri meant lesbian! *damn!* -Lani
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Reviewed By: cutie_pie_2101_1012 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2003 17:55 CST
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just to tell u kagome's third friend is Ayumi update soon
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Reviewed By: Cryxxy-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2003 21:32 CST
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The name of Kagome's friend is Ayumi. Just wanted to let you know and great story, especially for halloween.
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Reviewed By: AnnaMay-Ker On: October 27, 2003 16:27 CST
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Kagome's friends are Eri, she hasshoulder lenth black hair amd wears a head band,then Yuka with her black hair cut just below the ear and last is Ayumi with her wavy black hair just past her shoulder, she has a few strands of hair right above her ear pulled back and held with a clip.
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Reviewed By: Golden_Fire_Goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2003 10:31 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great, so far, it kept me at the edge kof my seat. One thing that i want to know is what happened to the evil beings? Why are they trapped in the house? ALso, how are you going to get Inu-Yash in the story line now?
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Title: Hey!
Reviewed By: Slywolf9 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2003 20:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hallo! hehe! thanks for telling me wut it mean! hehe, i finally noe! well, this was a very good chappie! it dont matter to me if its short or long! hehe, as long as it is good! o, btw, im glad you updated, cause i was still scared! lol, i crazy ne? well, this is very good so far and i cant wait for more! hugs n kisses n lollies n get wells, Ai-Lani btw, i hope inu does turn up! ^.~
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Reviewed By: ME On: October 20, 2003 12:46 CDT
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Ooohh....I like it so far!! scary,ne?? well, I vote for a lemon---you write such good ones (loved your halloween treat!!)---besides, Inu and Kag are my absolute fav couple^_~ please, please....a lemon...
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Title: H-Hey.....
Reviewed By: Slywolf9 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2003 00:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey! that scared me man! dang! im like freaked out now! i noe its just a story *r-right?!!?!...* so, y-yeah...eheh....good job ne way, n i hope you update soon! btw, wuts like post meant? like post halloween? i dunno thass y...appreciate it if ya tell me! hugs n kisses n lollies! Ai-Lani
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Title: My Scary Halloween!
Reviewed By: gigi-chan On: October 18, 2003 16:08 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Don't leave me hanging (by a noose)-lol... Please continue. I'd like to find out how inu gets into this and how it ends. It reminds me of the horror movie "Amityville." Well... laters!
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Reviewed By: Miko_Snow Godess_Me [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2003 02:13 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was pretty creepy!!!! Good work, I can't wait to see what happens when they acctually go into the house! update soon. :)
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