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Reviewed By: Biganimefan1 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2003 21:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow i have DEEP chills doing summer sults on my spine. this is really chillig. oh and your youkie is spelled youkai. thats all
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Reviewed By: Relix On: December 16, 2003 06:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finish the story please!
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Title: great story!
Reviewed By: diablos42069 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2003 15:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope you update soon! i wanna see how they all get out, and how they find ayumi if she is in a room that has no doors or windows..... or how inu yasha will realize its not real and get out and find her! amnyways, UPDATE SOON! GREAT GHOST STORRY!!!! arianna
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Title: AHHHHHH!!!!!
Reviewed By: diablos42069 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2003 15:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok, right now, i have just finished chapter 5 and i have to say this..... AAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!! THAT WOULD FREAK ME OUT!!!!!! the one thing i hate the most in this world are bugs (especially spiders) and to tell you the truth, i would rather be burned alive or have someone put a gun to my head and blow my brains away than what ayumi had to go through!!! Don't get me wrong... I've seen my fair share of ghosts and such, but i am not afraid of those things... not as much as BUGS anywyas... that chapter gave me the CREEPS!!!!! i was shivering the whole time!!! I had to tell you. this story is the only story that has ever creeped me out so bad.... ahhhhh! i feel like bugs are crawling in my ears and on my body now... ahhh!!!!.. ok, im gonna keep reading, i just HAD to let that out..... great story by the way! arianna
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Title: Hello
Reviewed By: Slywolf9 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2003 16:18 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey hun! good job! love the way they used ta be! their partnt would be ashamed of them!!! *sigh* eep! id actually die then have to feed on fear! i dont like inflicting pain on others! cept my bro...but newayz! good chapter! i hope ya get some good ideas ta elp ya with this story! i noe its hard...but its good hun! good! well, i hope ya update soon! -Lani
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Reviewed By: Julie B On: November 22, 2003 22:47 CST
Comment/Review:
What will happen next? What will Saya do? Will she be able to help Kagome, her friends, and Inuyasha? Please update as soon as possible.
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Reviewed By: Snow Godess_Me On: November 22, 2003 12:12 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great story, I really love it! Poor Kagome and Inu, not to mention Kagome's friends those shadow things are just mean! Can't wait to see the next update, hope it's soon! Keep up the good work! Ja Ne
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Title: My Scary Halloween
Reviewed By: Suzuko On: November 20, 2003 13:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi this is my first time rewiewing this but There is one thing I'd like to make clear. I went on a japanese/english dictionary site and I looked up the word lesbian it is spelled Resubian or Rezu (abbr). The word Yuri is translated into lily all this I got off of this site http://www.freedict.com/onldict/jap.html I love how scary this story is and I don't mean anything negative by what I had put up previously I had just went there because I had thought Yuri meant snow.
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Title: Hey!
Reviewed By: Slywolf9 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2003 23:03 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
heya! sry it took so long for me to review, been REAL busy! eep! wellz, GOOD JOB!!! poor Yash! my poor lil baby! I hope that it's Saya right? well-i hope that she can save Yash, who in turn can save Kagome n her fwens! eep! damn short shadow ghost or spirit thingys! eep! wellz, ne way, good ob! it'll be a shame wen this ends, but i LOOOVE it neway! i'll wait for da next chappie, no worries, just take your time okeez! and-are you still sick? hope you arent hun! take care! -Lani
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Reviewed By: Julie B On: November 18, 2003 10:16 CST
Comment/Review:
She's not really dead, right? Couldn't Saya help somehow? Maybe telling him that it was an illusion? Please update as soon as possible.
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Reviewed By: ME On: November 16, 2003 21:53 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I SO hope you haven't abandoned this fic since halloween is over--I keep checking back to see if you've updated--I love it and I want to know what's going to happen next!! How's Inu going to get in on the action?? will Inu and Kag 'get together'^_~?? will Kagome's friends stop being pests and getting Kag into all sorts of trouble?? I'd like to 'stay tuned' and find out, but.......only if you update!!!! *please*
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Reviewed By: RedHerring [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2003 17:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
her friends names are Eri, Ayumi, and Yuka. hehe.
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Reviewed By: Sary On: October 31, 2003 21:56 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOur story is scary, I am really getting goose bumps. Good job. I undrestand about having phnomonia; I had it 5 years ago when I was in 8th grade. It sucks. I hope you get better!
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Title: Hey!
Reviewed By: Slywolf9 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2003 00:37 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hiyee! ewwwwwwwiiiiieeeee!!!! i also LOATHE ne bugs cept for fireflies, ladybugs, butterflies, n moths! n i have a special vendetta or w/e against roaches! y? dont ask....eek! im sorry that it happened to ya! musta sucked! man.....well, good job! i hope u update soon and that yash is in the next chapter or one after that! i love him thats y..lol. good job n keep it up! -Lani
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Reviewed By: Julie B On: October 30, 2003 23:40 CST
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What will happen next? Where is Inuyasha? Did Souta tell him where she is? Please update as soon as possible.
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