| "Two Swords: The Tangled Web" Reviews/Comments [ 76 ] |
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Reviewed By: peregrine829 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2006 20:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your imagination and style are quite impressive, but you misnamed all of Kenshin's attacks: Ryu-Tsui-Sen, Ryu-Kan-Sen, Sou-Ryu-Sen, Ryu-Shou-Sen, Kuzu-Ryu-Sen. I'm also surprised you didn't include the Do-Ryu-Sen, which is most similar to the Kaze no Kiza, or Hiten Mitsurugi Ryu's succession technique, Amakakeru Ryu no Hirameki. All in all an excellent fic, though.
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Title: Frickin' AWESOME!
Reviewed By: princeyukiCAPTAINMOTOKO On: April 13, 2005 17:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is one of the best fanfics that I have ever been privileged to read. Oh, let's just drop the formalities; your fanfic RULES. Then again, your writing outshine mine anyday, but that still doesn't mean that you're off the hook. Write more, I say! P.S. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: HauntedReality [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2005 19:03 CST
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I definitely hate myself now because I was just thinking about maybe doing a fic with a Sanosuke/Sango pairing. I thought they were wonderful for each other as soon as I watched Rurouni Kenshin for the first time. Anyway, yours was the only fic I can ever remember reading that included their relationship. It got me thinking about how much I enjoyed they way you tied the two worlds together. I really thought it was one of the most clever crossover fictions I had read. The Kagome/Kaoru looking the same thing was a bit of a leap perhaps, but no more so than her and Kikyo looking the same. Anyway, the reason I hate myself is that I never reviewed! Please forgive me. Your fic easily deserved a review, and better late than never I suppose. I enjoyed your story greatly.
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Reviewed By: HauntedReality [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2005 19:03 CST
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I definitely hate myself now because I was just thinking about maybe doing a fic with a Sanosuke/Sango pairing. I thought they were wonderful for each other as soon as I watched Rurouni Kenshin for the first time. Anyway, yours was the only fic I can ever remember reading that included their relationship. It got me thinking about how much I enjoyed they way you tied the two worlds together. I really thought it was one of the most clever crossover fictions I had read. The Kagome/Kaoru looking the same thing was a bit of a leap perhaps, but no more so than her and Kikyo looking the same. Anyway, the reason I hate myself is that I never reviewed! Please forgive me. Your fic easily deserved a review, and better late than never I suppose. I enjoyed your story greatly.
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Reviewed By: lady_neko On: December 04, 2004 19:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was a very good story. i really liked the ending. im a really big fan of inu yasha and raroni kenshin so this drew my attention. im happy i head it and i look foward to more of your storys!
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Reviewed By: the god swored, tokijin On: November 30, 2004 17:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
will you read my story, for youre writtingis great, will you edit mine with a review, only one chapter so far first ive ever written, but with ritters like you it would be an honor if you'd read my one simple chapter" the swords betrayel" inuyasha fan fiction, please review it....thank you, give me ideas thankyou
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Reviewed By: Miko no Tears and Aya [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2004 18:46 CDT
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Wow! tht was fantaistic! i was afraid it was incomplete when i fisrt found it, but the ideas behind it were too cool to pass up regardless. I would have to agree that Short of Miroku, Sano is the best for Sango, of many of the anime charas i know of. i loved what you did w/ all of the couples and how u intertwined all of them in one way or another. Especially how every one's fave Kitsune became Kenshin's many times great Grandsfather. i loved how u wrote this and plan to read anything else you have written. Tyhank you for sharing this great fic!
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Reviewed By: Rootbeer [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2004 19:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU BITCH!!! You made me cry TWICE!!!! I love your story... the ideas were great and you pulled them together really well. And you write very well too, don't ever stop!
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Reviewed By: kk [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2004 21:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
check
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Reviewed By: DemonAngel90 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2004 17:01 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked it. It was interesting and absorbing. I hope you make more stories that are just as entertaining! I just love RK and Iy crossovers! Their exciting and interesting! WRITE MORE!
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Reviewed By: Kumiko [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2004 19:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
I HATE YOUR STORY!!!!!!UNDOUBTEDLY THE WORST EVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!KAORU AND KAGOME DO NOT LOOK ALIKE!!!!!!!!!!!SANGO AND SANO NEEEEEEEEEEEVVVVVVEERRRRRRRR!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Don't take it personally I don't like to be mean.I hope you don't hate I'm sorry.
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Reviewed By: Sock On: April 09, 2004 16:08 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My God... That ending is the greatest one ever.
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Title: BORING
Reviewed By: GemJewel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2004 20:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
i read to chpt 10 and only chpt 10 because the story was so bbbbbbbboooorrrrriiiinnnnnnggggggg!!!!!! come on! i mean couldn't u have made it alittle more interesting.
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Reviewed By: Fluffys_Demoness [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2004 18:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was awesome! it was so sad tho.. T_T i love RK and IY crossovers!
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Reviewed By: I will not give my name On: February 23, 2004 22:06 CST
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This is so sad. I loved it. It has a wonderful ending. ( cring in the background )
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