| "And Then They" Reviews/Comments [ 55 ] |
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Reviewed By: QueenPhoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2005 12:00 CDT
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Kyo really is a screamer! ^_~ Kyo x Ayame seems to be especially kinky though I can't be sure why... *thinks back to Manga Volume 4 where Kyo wakes up to find Ayame in his bed* Hn...
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Reviewed By: QueenPhoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2005 11:52 CDT
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^_^ YAY, it's everyone xKyo!!! How could Gure rape Haru without knowing? The whole heat thing... but your explanation doesn't really make sense and why doesn't Haru just tell Shigure (and go Black and beat the crap out of him). AND WHAT IS AYAME DOING TO KYO? Better be good ^_~.
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Reviewed By: QueenPhoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2005 11:41 CDT
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*pout* Slightly shorter chapter... v. good lemon, though a bit obscure. Kinky Hatori forever!!! Kyo is such a slut *grins* Go KYO!! *sweatdrops* Aya, Gure, Ha'ri, Haru and Kyo basically go around and fuck each other... why can't they all just lock themselves in a closet together dammit? *grins* Hint, hint..
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Reviewed By: QueenPhoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2005 11:31 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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WAHEY!!! Nice long chapter, lots of yummy slash, Kyo's sudden xHaru v. surprising and Kyo's VERY SUDDEN xHa'ri thing REALLY SHOCKING (but good). Not much Yuki in there... *huggles Ayame* The snake-hugging comment was v. funny! ShixAyaxHa'ri rules!!! All of 'em just kinda bunged together rules!! Slight randomness of fic v. refreshing, and very original fanfic you have here! Enjoyed first chapter immensely!!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Trio Wing On: April 21, 2005 15:00 CDT
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KYAAAAAAAA! You WILL update!! *starts chucking bricks to get you updating* Pweeeeeeeeeeez?!?!?!? *gives you a puppy dog look... sort of*
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Reviewed By: guess On: March 01, 2005 16:59 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok couple more things. sry i forgot to rate you, i gave u a ten and it stands for all the categories. and also, to coldheart: in case you do not get the concept of a fanFICTION, it really doesn't MATTER how much the characters are like their real characters. the idea that you can do WHATEVER YOU WANT with your favorite characters is what is behind the word FICTION. i think this fic is ORIGINAL, and it wouldn't be the same if the characters were a little OOC. so to sum up: if you want to find characters exactly as they were made, stay away from fanfiction sites and go watch/read the REAL thing.
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Reviewed By: guess On: March 01, 2005 16:53 CST
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you know, for some reason, i always wish that when something like in this chap happens, the "victim" will get mad and stop talking to the other guy...i want haru to feel bad about scaring poor kyo! but NO! kyo has to LIKE it!!! other than that, though, it was a good chap. and you really shouldn't worry about my opinion on the whole kyo-being-mad-thing--i'm a little odd that way...
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Title: 12 THUMBS UP!!!!>
Reviewed By: Fallen_Angel_Vincent [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2004 11:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You really deserve the 10's but i shoulda given you a 1 on originality, everyone wants to pound kyou-kun. next time make this story more ineresting, like, throw in an orgy. But, i like the kyouxayame pairing, really hot. You're very creative, do you think you could do something for me? I couldn't find a cloudxvincent,(FF7), story to save my life, (a good one anyway..). could you make me one? If you would, i'll be looking. But don't stop with the Furuba thing, it really seems to work for you.
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Title: hi
Reviewed By: darkdragon91 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2004 21:33 CST
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uumm... not to sound rude or anything but umm on chapt. six wen u said "This isn't making love- this is gothic sex" umm it's suppose to be fetish gothic sex. yeah srry just wanna point that out srry dont hate me? but anywayz great fic!! ^^
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Reviewed By: lntora [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2004 08:51 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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To SecretFlame: I have two cents in my pocket, where do you want me to remit payment for your unwanted opinion? To Coldheart: Clear you're saying this from envy, because even though this is obviously a fanfiction and done to enjoy something that wouldn't not happen otherwise, you're feeling left out because Kyou's getting screwed and you're not. That's okay. I'm sure someone will be happy to send that dildo your way if you need it that badly. Anyway. Black Hylia, it's a lovely lemon you have here, and I'm glad you're continuing it.
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Reviewed By: eien_ni_kawaii [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2004 08:47 CST
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Please continue! I really like the fic alot!
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Reviewed By: Tigerbaby [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2004 21:46 CST
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OOPS I just read other reviews and dont listen to the flames you get. Lots of GREAT WRITERS get them. I am sure i will get a lot but it is my first and so far only pic. Just mind less sex as i am not much good at writing much else LOL
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Reviewed By: Tigerbaby [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2004 21:36 CST
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OMG!!! Totally absolutely love this fic I am in the process of writting one with KyoXHaru but friend says it is just mind less sex LOL But I love it. Hope you update again soon really really soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!^____^
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Reviewed By: Water Sprite [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2004 13:10 CST
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Do me a faver, ne? Please disregard any flames that you may get... 'cause they're completely USELESS! Please continue to update! >^-^< Thanks much!
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Reviewed By: candylady123 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2004 23:55 CDT
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Nice chapter when can i see more?
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