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Reviewed By: caerfree@wispertel.net On: September 08, 2004 17:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I had been waiting for this forever! I stopped looking for it. But that was great. The lemon was very nice. REalistic, but not to clinical. It was nice. Leon was more screechy than I imagine him, but his bad language and some of his reactions were so funny, and it seemed him. Thanks for finishing this up. I think you did a good job.
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Reviewed By: Chiyo H. On: August 16, 2004 19:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved the entire story. I really hope you create a sequel to it.
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Title: Hentai onnas unite!
Reviewed By: hauduck [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2004 20:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey V-chan . . . guess who?? Every time I read one of your beloved stories I always attempt to find the lacking qualities as far as the "lemony" scenes go and I hate to say this, but I couldn't find a darn thing wrong with this one. D jumped Leon's bones, which I just absolutely adored, I'm not the type who likes all that talking. (Unless it involves some kind of torture, then it's okay.) This was cut and dry, liquor him up on fruit, bathe him, and then go to town!!! Woo-hoo! Another fantastic job my friend. And like everyone else I can hardly wait for the sequel . . . but only because you promised more lemons (pointless as they may be to the plot; GAWD I love those!) Until then I shall be haunting your every thought and whim. Jaa! ~O~ ohohohohohohoho!!!!
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Reviewed By: Youkai Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2004 23:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please, Please, Please update this fic! I really want to find out what is going to happen, and right now I am on pins and needles waiting for an update. Keep up the good work, and please update soon.
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Reviewed By: padg On: June 14, 2004 00:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it! I love It! I love It!! Can't wait to see your love sence since your date one was so lovely.
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Reviewed By: Zero Celsius On: June 10, 2004 05:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved everything but towards the end there were a few more typos then preferred. Your work was extremly enjoyable and I will be sure to read any sequels you decide to write for this piece. Over all fabulous work!
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Reviewed By: Ithilelda [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2004 18:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey I've been reading for a little bit now and I just want to say that this is a great story and I would love to see a sequel. I would love to see just how Leon deals with being a Kami and how it would affect his life. I really hope you decide to write a sequel. best of luck with any other fics you may have going. Sayonara
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Title: troubled times
Reviewed By: djewelp On: May 29, 2004 08:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I realy enjoyed reading this story and how Leon and D can now be together forever. I also enjoyed how it started out with problems for them both but happily resoved.
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Reviewed By: Calico-chan On: May 19, 2004 18:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmmm... The only Yue I know is the one from CCS, and the Japanese meaning is reason or something... I like this story. Can't wait for next chapter, and the special seventh chapter ;)
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Reviewed By: bgal [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2004 07:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
yes yes special 7th chapter please!
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Reviewed By: Luki_Dimension [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2004 14:07 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to say that I just love this fanfic, and I REALLY hope you update soon! It's too good to be left unfinished for too long!
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Reviewed By: zork_necrophidius [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2004 12:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i enjoyed this stroy alot so far you have a great plot so far i love it please do up-date for it
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Reviewed By: Hells Librarian [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2004 14:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*gasp* Who will win.. I love this story! Please keep writing as quickly as humanly possible. XD Yay!
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Title: troubled times
Reviewed By: padg On: March 26, 2004 12:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the characters act in a reasonable fashion with no out of left feild actions. the piece flows smoothly from one sence to the next. and it is just a very enjoyable piece to read. You talked about a bout a seventh chapter. Please! write it. Pretty please. Love your work
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Reviewed By: Anselyna On: February 13, 2004 10:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi, I really enjoyed reading this story. I love how you did the interactions between Leon and D. It might get a tad out of character at times but your originality/creativity of the story more than makes up for it! Like many who have reviewed before me, i really can see this in the POH universe. Kudos to a job well done! Looking forward to the next chapter. Oh and I like Yue too ^.^
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