| "Three Days of Hell" Reviews/Comments [ 72 ] |
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Reviewed By: bardocksbabygirl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2003 18:12 CST
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yah great story need a sequeal so you can have miroku and his half breed meet agina and Sango and fluffy get together
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Reviewed By: bardocksbabygirl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2003 18:10 CST
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it would be cool if she is like inuyasha big sister
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Reviewed By: bardocksbabygirl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2003 18:08 CST
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thats is so coool sango and fluffy He is my fav
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Reviewed By: bardocksbabygirl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2003 18:04 CST
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yeah great chapter to bad miroku adn sango jsut couldn't let go like the demons and be with each other
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Reviewed By: um On: November 14, 2003 00:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
"his mistivious grin" Mischevious Through, not threw. Okay, the rest of the spelling errors I can deal with. But.... How can you ask for reviews and suggestions if you don't give the time? (Not objecting to the frequency of the chapters. Would not have reviewed if not for the fact that you posted 4 chapters in one day. Congradulations, you win.)
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Reviewed By: bardocksbabygirl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2003 22:00 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this fic. It is cool.
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Reviewed By: bardocksbabygirl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2003 22:00 CST
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i think you should have some sorta of explanation as to why she bit him as he bit her. adn add soem sango and moroku lemon in there too can't forget them
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Reviewed By: bardocksbabygirl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2003 21:58 CST
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more lemon
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Reviewed By: bardocksbabygirl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2003 21:58 CST
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yeah a lemon
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Reviewed By: bardocksbabygirl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2003 21:57 CST
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mate of course
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Reviewed By: bardocksbabygirl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2003 21:57 CST
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i like the old woman's advice.
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Reviewed By: bardocksbabygirl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2003 21:56 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yah just keeps getting better
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Reviewed By: bardocksbabygirl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2003 21:56 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yah another great chapter
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Reviewed By: Slywolf9 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2003 17:10 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
heya! good chappie! glad this is a yash/gome fic...near about had a heart attack wen i thot u sed it wasnt gonna b one! eep! but this was good! i like Yash's punishment hehe-ne wayz. good job! LOVED it and really cant wait for more cuz ur such a good author! -Lani
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Reviewed By: notzathros On: November 13, 2003 11:09 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good lemon! Thanks for writing! Can't wait to read more.
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