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Reviewed By: dragonstar1949@yahoo.com On: August 12, 2005 18:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope it's not too long before another update! I'm loving this story and I want to see how it works out (hopefully to the happily ever after that I want for Dee and Ryo, but... I'll see, huh?) I love Dee through this especially, and the relationship between him and Bikky. Write more -- please.... please... please
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Reviewed By: evean On: July 06, 2005 07:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story, it made me cry. It's very touching, deep and realistic. Denial can do a lot of strange things to you. I like you characterization of Dee, his layers of personality, his insecurities. It's nice to see a person, not a bunch of cliches.Thank you for great time and please, update soon.
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Reviewed By: lady_kail On: June 21, 2005 14:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You updated!!!!! I love you. Please keep it up. I've been addicted since the first chapter.
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Reviewed By: LAChick [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2005 15:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
update soon!!!!! Ryo is being mean to Dee!! I need that to be fixed before my life could be bliss again. Oh and please up date your other story about Dee, Ryo, Lyn, and Drew too. The one where Dee's blind. That one needs a happy ending. Keep up the awsome writing.
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Reviewed By: jenay On: June 19, 2005 10:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really great story :) You're so damn good!
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Reviewed By: Mauztattoo [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2005 22:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aaargh! Please write more! I can't wait until Ryo comes to his senses, or Lynn decideds to try polyamory?
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Title: w00t and a half
Reviewed By: Miztikal_Dragon (not logged on) On: April 12, 2005 12:34 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey great story so far. Please keep up the great work and update asap. I can't wait to find out how Dee and Ryo will survive this ^^ -Krystal-
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Reviewed By: lady_kail On: March 26, 2005 14:30 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! You updated!! I've been waiting forever!!! It's a great story, pleeeease keep going and finish it!!
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Reviewed By: Catalyst of Death On: February 17, 2005 18:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was crying from your last chapter. Which is strange because I have never cried in about 8 years. Your story was very moving. I hope that wasn't the last chapter of this story. I would like to know if Ryo would change his mind and get Dee back, or will it end in angst.
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Reviewed By: moni On: January 23, 2005 17:02 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is such a great story,please update the next chapter fast!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Kyeda On: January 19, 2005 16:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed your story! It was well thought out, well written, the characters stayed in character, and the plot was original and interesting. I loved Dee's personal day, and all the thought you seem to put into each character. I'm sorry that it is as yet unfinished, and hope you will consider completing it as I would love to see how it ends! Thanx for the great story!
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Reviewed By: Kyeda On: January 19, 2005 16:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed your story! It was well thought out, well written, the characters stayed in character, and the plot was original and interesting. I loved Dee's personal day, and all the thought you seem to put into each character. I'm sorry that it is as yet unfinished, and hope you will consider completing it as I would love to see how it ends! Thanx for the great story!
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Reviewed By: Kyeda On: January 19, 2005 16:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed your story! It was well thought out, well written, the characters stayed in character, and the plot was original and interesting. I loved Dee's personal day, and all the thought you seem to put into each character. I'm sorry that it is as yet unfinished, and hope you will consider completing it as I would love to see how it ends! Thanx for the great story!
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Reviewed By: KitsuneLover [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2004 19:16 CDT
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Hey, where's the next chapter?!?! Hehehe, I want it here soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Nah, no offense, I just love this story so much. You have to hurry and get the next chapter out soooooooon!!!!!!! Keep writing pwease!
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Reviewed By: Serpenteyes [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2004 13:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Waaah! *sniffles* That was so sad! Ahem. *clears throat and dries tears* I'm glad you're back! This was very well written, and I sincerly hope you will keep writing. Please update on Time for healing: aftermath.
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