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Reviewed By: aishie On: June 13, 2004 23:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
pls pls continue. this is so wonderful. i love the way you write. you're so great! each chapter unfolds in the best of its own way. its more than pleasure..its also a learning experience. i love that moment with bikky and dee. that got me a lot!
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Reviewed By: Athena-Lee On: February 04, 2004 20:58 CST
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Ok, its ten at night ad i gotta be getting to bed now. Ill read the rest tommorow.Im putting this on my favorites cause Im really enjoying it. Goodnight
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Title: Sniff....
Reviewed By: Special_K On: January 02, 2004 10:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Irish, You're turning me into a Sap! But it's okay, I don't mind! *^-^*
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Reviewed By: Cole'sLover On: December 13, 2003 12:09 CST
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Irish, I just wanted to say AWESOME. I cried like a baby after reading this last chapter. You have a way of writing that brings the characters to life. You give so much depth to their personalities and feelings. You keep writing and I'll keep reading. I am a diehard FAKE fangirl and I appreciate the hard work you put into your stories.
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Reviewed By: Turin, but i didn't log on anymore On: December 07, 2003 18:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not very often that i'm open to new characters, but the characters you created fit perfectly! n.n Hope this story will be finished! I'm still shocked that Bikky behaved... O.o nice... might try that with my brother...
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Title: A lovely Irish Stew
Reviewed By: Jexia [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2003 21:47 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're such an observer, Irish, and you give the reader so much in terms of characters and interaction. You put almost as much effort into characters you may never use again as to your main ones, giving us charming detailed portraits of the shopkeeper, the orphans, the priest. The scene with Rose was well done. You show Dee's increasing turmoil and vulnerability. Lovely interaction between Dee and Penguin. It occurs to me you that you throw so many different elements into your writing, then let them simmer until the flavors marry. Your prose is like a rich Irish stew,nourishing and full of flavor. As much pain as Dee is in, I see that Ryo too is suffering and his crisis of faith is a big part of that, I think. Looking forward eagerly to your next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Momma Cat [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2003 21:08 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Cool. I wouldn't mind that music set-up. I 'tried' listening to the soundtrack for both SOTF and TFH. I got most of the songs to play but my com gave me trouble with others. -_- Hey is it me or does that song by Tatu 'Show Me Love' sound like it was made for this story? I swear, everytime I see the title it starts playing in my head. Have you heard it?
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Title: This is Getting Annoying
Reviewed By: Irish [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2003 14:44 CST
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Media Miner is sucking it up with processing the reviews.
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Title: this is getting annoying
Reviewed By: Irish [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2003 05:13 CST
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I wonder if this is MM or my computer that is being a btich about reviews
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Reviewed By: Momma Cat [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2003 00:00 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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Man Dee has got it rough. How can you be a man, love a man and not a least be bi? Is having children by adopting instead of blood relation such a hard thing for Ryo to do? Don't even get me started on Dee. Poor love sick puppy. He really deserves more.
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Title: Awesome!
Reviewed By: Wildefyre [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2003 08:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is awesome girl and you know it! I really like how you describe things. Those little things help to make the story more believable. I'll be most interested in seeing where this goes and how Ryo finally comes to accept his sexuality. Keep up the great work girl! TTYL
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Title: stupid MediaMiner
Reviewed By: Irish [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2003 16:39 CST
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just a test... stupid server wont let me see my reviews.
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Reviewed By: gokus_girl_dbz@hotmail.com On: November 15, 2003 19:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey Irish! Man I am so glad that you are writing more fanfics about Lyn and Drew. I have really come to love those two while reading "A Time For Healing." I really like this fic and I hope later on you put a juicy little lemon scene with those two in it. O.O Keep up the good work and I'll be looking forward to reading more of this fic!
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Reviewed By: Elisel On: November 15, 2003 00:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Mua-ha! You may have been two-timing on fanfiction.net (and from the way the wind has blown over there lately, I don't blame you!) but I've found you once again! I, the... um... not terribly creepy FAKE-readin' cyber-stalker. Okay, that was a really weird way to say 'hi' - but seriously, good to see you're still writing, and I was all happy to catch 'familiar face' Lyn back on the scene! Just hopped onto mediaminer tonight for the first time, but I'll have to stick around and keep reading. :) Keep up the good work!
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Title: Cheap Ploy by the author
Reviewed By: IrishLefay On: November 13, 2003 12:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
So Ive found that once one review is left others follow. I don't know if this is because then people see that at least one person loved it or hated it enough to leave a reveiw or what but, hey whatever works. As usual I sucked it up on spelling and grammer no shocker there. I really need to be more patient and actually let my beta do her job. This piece Ive ever written, but its not crack job either, I think its pretty okay over all. I think is pretty original, no one ever actually has Ryo struggling with, and trying to understand his sexuality. Well anyway I've tooted my own horn enough now lol
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