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Title: *jaw drops*
Reviewed By: kornychic [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2004 20:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy god i love this fic! I love morgan, and how you made her your own, especially since she's irish! what a great idea! i have my own fic with an oc that hooks up with sesshomaru, and this is the only oc/sessh fic i've read that rules. oh man i loved the part where she kisses him, it gave me butterflies or something! so magical lol, i just love this fic and i wanna see the next chapter asap! you're an excellent writer, and yay for sessh/oc! CHEERS
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Title: Hokay so yes...
Reviewed By: Damion_the_Fey [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2004 19:38 CST
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Wow I actually just read everyone elses reviews and they seem very patient and kind and I appologize if I do sound rude because I am not trying to be. I really never commented on your glorious brilliant character Morgan who by the way I am madly in love with. She is such a creative character and I love best about her is her faults. You may read in fanfics as I have of these beautifly made characters but seem to be perfect in every way... I love how she is not the strongest but is cocky enough to be. I also enjoyed Rins growth and how it actually made sense when I did the calculations.yeah... I just am a really bored fanfic reader! ANYWAYS- yeah I've also read *BAM* suddenly Rins a teenager and no time has past at all but yet you are so crafty... or as Kyla has put it you are the Crafty Veteran. And also how you incorperated your past stories into it. Which of course I enjoyed that very much because when I finished your other strories I was so depressed and thought I would never see Inuyasha and Kagome again or meet their beautiful pup oh yes and the complications another touch of reality!yes and I most likely could go on forever which is why I plan to stop now. Choi* story was excellent update soon... please! ^.~*
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Title: Please Update!
Reviewed By: Damion_the_Fey [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2004 19:20 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I love your stories and each I have read! They are excellent so yes I would very much enjoy it if you were to update very soon! and yes I understand as a writer that I need to be patient so, Please update as soon a the possible. ^.~*
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Title: Worthy
Reviewed By: SpitFYER20 On: November 15, 2004 15:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just found your story today and I spent almost an hour pouring over it. I absolutly loved it! I found it hilarious! I really liked the fact that you made Rin grow up! Even though I'm not too fond of the whole Inuyasha and Kagome pairings. I love the whole Morgan character. She really spices things up for Fluffy. Please keep up the good work and please update soon. I really want to read more in the near future. Until then Good job and please update......is tomorrow too soon? lol
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Title: Good
Reviewed By: Runishie (not signed in ) On: November 15, 2004 11:30 CST
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YAY! Your great at updating I really liked this chapter I'm falling inlove more and more with morgan as the story progresses. ^_^ Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: November 14, 2004 16:51 CST
Comment/Review:
Excellent chapter once again. I love how this is progressing, the way you are playing out the tensions between the two of them. I think Sesshomaru is really going to need to let the mask slip quite a bit more for Morgan to feel comfortable...the thing is how will he cope I wonder. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2004 17:35 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
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I really enjoy your writing. You're in my favorites list. This wasn't a bad chapter; the characters were moved to the new scene and more cast was introduced. However, the spelling was really, really bad.Examples: "Morgan aloud it" == allowed "He seemed bord." == bored "servents" == servants "definitly" == definitely Those are from just the first two paragraphs.
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: October 14, 2004 18:39 CDT
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Beautiful chapter as always. DOn't worry about the gap between chapters, from what you said you are...about as busy as someone can possibly get without falling over from exhaustion. I hope everything goes well, good luck with college. I do look forwards to the next chapter when you have chance but don't hurry on my or anyone else's account. I will still be here and I would hope so will everyone else. My apologies for rambling. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: Thornwitch On: October 14, 2004 14:50 CDT
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I like this story, but for christ's sake, use the spellchecker on you computer! That, and there are a lot of innapropriately homonyms in this story. For instance, you keep spelling "hide" as "hyde" its super annoying.
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Reviewed By: Kikyou_104 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2004 21:13 CDT
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i review again please i love this story and i would like to know wat will happen...please update soon thank you...ja ne
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Reviewed By: Horse_Gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2004 23:55 CDT
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I love your story!!!! keep up the good work! ps please update soon
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Title: yeh
Reviewed By: Kikyou_104 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2004 16:16 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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i love this story but....it's been over a month since you've updated please update soon i love this story and i want to know wat happends next soo if you can update soon arigatou gozaimas
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Reviewed By: Julie B On: August 29, 2004 21:34 CDT
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What will happen next? Please update more as soon as possible.
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Title: awesomness
Reviewed By: Rhianon-chan On: August 10, 2004 16:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah.... T_T Rins growing up! ;_; that sweet little girl has grown up *sobbs* But Corey better wach his back.... he might find a claw in the back of it ^^;;! Anywhoo just keep it up! I so wanna read more..... but again this soooo should be a Rhianon/Seshomaru ficcy..... but thats just personaly opinion ;p Keep It Up!
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Reviewed By: Hoshi-sama On: August 09, 2004 10:54 CDT
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Woot ^_^ nicly done though the mate thing took mye by suprise. Awsomly done ^_^
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