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Title: KAWAII!!!
Reviewed By: Rhianon-chan On: August 08, 2004 19:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sighs* ahh..... I am loving it but I perfer a Rhianon/Seshomaru pairing for obvious reasons, But this is soooo kawaii! *imagins holding Inu Jr. in arms, and cooing over the cuteness* *ahem* anywhoo... Im gonna continue on this....
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Title: bummer
Reviewed By: Runishie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2004 16:01 CDT
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I hope you can get your internet up sooner but then again maybe not so you can update faster. I like how THE LORD sesshomaru has to inpress morgan who is of a lower class about damn time sesshomarue has to prove himself 'worthy,'. He would't get nothing from me not even a loving grin if he had vronered me like that. Oh Yeah I realli enjoy the story update soon.
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Title: CHAPTER 9
Reviewed By: jschu25 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2004 13:35 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
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Hi, Thanks for the update. There were a few spelling errors but I'm sure you've been busy. I enjoyed this chapter and look forward to the next one when you get to it. I really love the interaction between Sesshoumaru & Morgan. jschu25
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Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2004 19:28 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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This was a really good chapter, finally getting Morgan and Sesshoumaru together but the spelling and some of the punctuation was really bad; bad enough I had to read the sentences 2 or 3 times to comprehend them.
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Reviewed By: ~Naoko~ On: July 29, 2004 19:10 CDT
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i really liked this chapter. it made me smile.it was cute and real. its really hard to explain. but really i just really liked it.
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: July 29, 2004 18:05 CDT
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Good luck with the move, hope it goes well. That was another excellent chapter, good to see Sesshomaru finally making his move even if Morgan is reisting somewhat. Look forwards to seeing what happens at the party and how he will prove himself. Till then good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: ~Jinx~ On: July 13, 2004 17:35 CDT
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i think you are very good in keeping sesshomaro in check. i didnt spell his name right did i. any really good story i cant wait for you to update i really really really want to see the next chapter. i love this story.
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Title: -cries-
Reviewed By: Runishie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2004 14:47 CDT
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No you cn't why why do this to me I can't stand it when you do this I have to wait forever for you to update it makes me want to cry I read your other fic when Kagome and Inuyasha had kaori. why me . . update like there's wolves nipping at your wonderful heels plz
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Reviewed By: Horse_Gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2004 15:30 CDT
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I love your story !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! keep on writing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Star-Child On: July 09, 2004 17:49 CDT
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Nice, very nice. I hope the ice age comes soon, it's gettin good XD
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Title: dezeeluu( but not signed in yet to lazy)
Reviewed By: Dezzeeluu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2004 07:02 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i think u did an excellent job keepin him in check. i im glad your finally gettin setetled in and all. hope i update soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness(not signed on) On: July 06, 2004 00:47 CDT
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YAY!!!!! You updated!!! While reading I noticed that you're using the wrong bored. Board is like a piece of wood or something "bored" is when you have nothing to do. And you spelled stoic wrong, but those are the only ones I found so it's no biggie. I'm happy that the mean old woman was able to help Inuyasha and Kagome's son! And to think it was Kagome's milk all along. And I think you're doing fine keeping Sesshy in character but it was a little unlike him to give in so easily and decide on making Morgan his mate so soon. Well I hope you find an apartment, can I come live with you? j/k! Update as soon as you can!!!!!
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Reviewed By: blzzrd53 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2004 00:16 CDT
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You're absolutely right Sesshoumaru is OOC. It doesn't matter though, just continue the storyline wherever it goes. Too often an author cramps a plot by keeping someone in character when they really wouldn't be. Thanks for the update and KEEP WRITING!
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: July 05, 2004 16:23 CDT
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That was absolutely excellent. It came out perfectly capturing the turmoil between them in a way that...I can't find the right words to describe! ^_^; Don't worry about the gap between updates, this is more than worth the wait. Hope everything sorts it sefl out, will still be here when the next one arrives. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Title: wow_thank god!
Reviewed By: sesshou_lover On: July 05, 2004 11:46 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank god! Finally an update!I hope the next one doesn't take this long! ;)
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