| "Kagome! Where are you?!" Reviews/Comments [ 409 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kitsune_Bi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2004 17:55 PDT
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WOAH! GINGER YOU �$*@&%! SESSHOU IS KAGOME'S! NOT YOURS SO LAY OFF!!!! It's still funny though! hee hee hee
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Reviewed By: DogDemoness88 On: April 19, 2004 16:13 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it i was very very good!
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Reviewed By: Black Rose Lady (not logged on) On: April 18, 2004 14:19 PDT
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Oh, yeah! I was thinking, towards the end of this chapter "yeah, yeah. Kagome's got some really good points going for her, here." and then, when Sesshoumaru asks, "Would you try to get along with Naraku or Kikyo", blew me away! I can see Kikyo, (somewhat) but Naraku.....ooo....this will be interesting! VERY interesting....~~~~BRL~~~~~~~~~~
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Reviewed By: InsaneAuthoress [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2004 11:51 PDT
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Great chapter! I really liked it! I never really liked Ginger... Man this fics so cool! First we have a huge story about the switching worlds and then we get a whole new big story about taking down his idiot mother! YAY! Keep it up this was great!
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Reviewed By: InsaneAuthoress [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2004 21:55 PDT
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Sesshomaru's married O_O! bum bum bum! I can't wait for you to update!
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Reviewed By: Black Rose Lady (not logged on) On: April 17, 2004 21:29 PDT
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Oh, wow! That idea for this story, regarding crossing this one over with other fanfictions is really AWESOME! I don't think it has ever been done...then again, there are MANY, MANY things in this story that have never been done! Anyhow, a very good chapter--not that I expected less from you! Good writing--see you next time! ~~~~~Black Rose Lady~~~~~~~~~
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Reviewed By: lexi2 On: April 17, 2004 14:55 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey this is an awsome story keep up the good work i cant wait for the chapter to be up!!!!!!!!
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Title: cool
Reviewed By: The Lecturess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2004 14:19 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If she keeps sucking on him that way instead of takeing him all the way in then it is going to bigger. I love this story!
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Reviewed By: StormAZ [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2004 02:50 PDT
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YES!! I can FINALLY get back to my stories (having a motherboard implode has got to be one of life's meaner experiences =\ ) Ah well, caught up on the story and it's still going great. And for all that Gilligan messes up ... for those of us that actually remember that show ... I think the cube forgot that things always end up working out and having something end up better for the castaways than what they were, so this ought to get REAL interesting!! And I'm sorry, but the idea that the castaways were never ... intimate? was one I through out when I was a kid.
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Title: It's been awhile, ne? ^_~
Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin (logged in? nay) On: April 15, 2004 23:03 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, well, well... it seems Kagome's standard may backfire. She expects Sesshoumaru to share her with Inu... but can she deal with the idea of him mating/inpregnating his other 2 wives??? OOOoooo. Evil cliffy. *smirk* Zowee! They weren't interrupted... 3 times!!! Whoo hoo! *grins* Nice, very nice. (Not that I'm a lemon writing expert, but... I know what I like;) *a pair of sopping wet panties hits the floor* *lmao* If I were Ginger... I'd probably hit on him too. (kag might kill me, but HELL it'd be worth it if I could touch him!) Hmmm... three days, huh? (more like four) Yeah, it might be best if she hangs with Mary Anne for awhile. Maybe not Ginger. And Sesshoumaru... *blinks* When you first mentioned this world, I kept seeing a scene in my head... Kag says that Sess's "the Lord of the Western Lands" and Mr. Howell is all skeptical. "Lord? Lord of what Western Lands?" So, as it usually happens in the show, Lovey pipes in, "Well, dear, he IS from Japan so... maybe he's the lord of the lands west of japan. (explanation: awhile back I found a japanese word that meant westernlands... and it referred to China and beyond, I think. and in the first IY movie, there are chinese demons that have a grudge against sess's dad for messing with them) What's that little country... it the name of a dish or something??" "China, Lovey darling. *bolts upright* China!!" "Dear, what are you excited about?" "I'm just imagining the rent he must rake in daily." *blinks* Okay, bad joke, but funnystupid to me. Basically, Mr. Howell starts trying to make business deals with Sess... trying to buy China for a necklace of Lovey's or something. *heh* I think up the dumbest things... ANYway... YES, I still love this story despite being so far behind in reviewing! ^_^
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Title: No!
Reviewed By: Kage Tsuki [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2004 17:06 PDT
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Don't leave it here! Updatae more please! I'm so glad you added more already, for I was just about to flame you for no continuing. ^^;;. But now I'm happy and will be watching this page for another update! ^.^
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Reviewed By: Kitsune_Bi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2004 05:11 PDT
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Oh Man.... GILIGAN!!!!!! *insert Jaws theme song* dun dun... dun dun... ^_________^ hee hee hee
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Reviewed By: Inari-foxgoddess(not logged on) On: April 13, 2004 18:35 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you are mean!!! you have to update as soon as you can!
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Reviewed By: Serina L337 Mistress [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2004 04:14 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think you explain and articulate your thoughts wonderfuly. You leave little room for misinterpritation, while letting the reader draw their own opinions from the story. My only gripe would be that you drag some of the fluff scenes out a little. Over all I think this is one of the best fics I've ever read! ^-^ Please update!!! Sesshy poo and Kay fics are the best!
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Reviewed By: Kitsune_Bi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2004 10:53 PDT
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AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!! THE FORMAT!!! THE FORMAT IS SCREWED UP!!! Just to say, at the moment there are a munch of weird symbols and squares, and other really weird stuff in betwee/ taking the place of the words. Woah that's confusing!
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