| "Kagome! Where are you?!" Reviews/Comments [ 409 ] |
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Reviewed By: Midnight Black Inu( not signed in) On: March 26, 2004 19:36 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very good story and you have a great imagination. I never expected them to end up on Gilligan's Island!
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Reviewed By: 12blue12(logged off) On: March 26, 2004 18:33 PST
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i really liked the latest update cuz i finally was able to c wat was happening outside the cube worlds bac to inus world coolie chappie and im hopin u update before april 8th cya!
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Reviewed By: Kitsune_Bi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2004 14:55 PST
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HAHAHAHAHAHA THE FOX TRICK? GREAT!!!! I don't think Naraku would really be stuck by that but it was still really funny! I LOVED the Raid scene too! GREAT CHAPTER!! ^-^
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Reviewed By: Nagasaki*not logged in! On: March 25, 2004 21:09 PST
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loved the chapter! i can't wait until your next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Kitsune_Bi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2004 14:45 PST
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NONONONONONONONONO Kagome was NOT raped. Please? It would suck if she were raped and the story doesn't need that kind of drama... it's perfect the way it is. Giligan's Island!!!! COOL!! Marianne and Ginger are Cool! YAY! I LOVE THIS STORY!!!
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Reviewed By: Shadow's Light On: March 25, 2004 13:22 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This has got to be one of the best written stories that I have ever read. At the end of World with no magic part 4 you say that you limit yourself to 25000 words per world. There is no need to do that. I would be happy if you wrote all you wanted. Except that torture part was a little harsh. I'm kind of an idealism person.
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Reviewed By: Blood_lust_Vampire [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2004 23:19 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Uh didn't see that one coming. Very good idea putting the Lord Of The Rings in this. Very origanal idea. How do you come up with the ideas for the worlds? Its amazing and very intertaining good job.
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Reviewed By: BRL On: March 24, 2004 20:12 PST
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OOHH! Gilligan's Island, is it? Very, VERY unexpected! excellent plot twist! Very good; very satisfying. Thanks! ~ Black Rose Lady~
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Reviewed By: edh On: March 24, 2004 18:49 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooooh, yes. gillagin'a isle. lol. cant vait 2 c ze chaos from zat 1. hurry up and update alvite? ja! ~~*~~*EMERALD-
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Reviewed By: InsaneAuthoress [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2004 16:10 PST
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AMAZING CHAPTER! For your longer idea, i can't imagine Kag's grandfather gone james bond style! Ah i though i do like the way you put it. You know, the major running away thing and so on and so forth. Very good! Also i can't beleive you'rethrowing them on 'that' island! Omigosh this is going to be great!
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Reviewed By: Blood_lust_Vampire [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2004 22:06 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG I love this story. Its so funny. I never thought I'd see the day that Sesshomaru had to do simple addition to control his feelings or even need to do simpl addition.
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Reviewed By: Kitsune_Bi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2004 12:10 PST
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I feel so inferior compared to your writing. :( YOU'RE JUST SO GOOD!
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Reviewed By: AsianEyes [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2004 16:16 PST
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"Aerial photos show a small fire here." The colonel points to one of the maps. "Our friends, the guerillas, know that we will spot it. SO, it's obviously a trap. They want us to enter that forest, where they'll ambush us." Wow, those Nazis are so smart. Not. LOL...those idiots. And...Sesshoumaru gets raped? Interesting...
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Reviewed By: Nagasaki [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2004 21:22 PST
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they better not fu** him...i'll never forgive you!!! please, please, please, please don't let them rape him!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i can't wait until your next chapter!
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Reviewed By: emerald dragon hanyou On: March 21, 2004 20:49 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yuor evil. ~~*~~*EMERALD-
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