| "Kagome! Where are you?!" Reviews/Comments [ 409 ] |
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Reviewed By: 12blue12)logged off On: March 16, 2004 20:20 PST
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holy crap hitler thats interesting didn't see that comeingwo wow and i thought it couldn't get any worse boy kag is eother gonna freak out (thats wat i wud do if i was taken by hitlewr the crazy bastard) or be all self confident for fluffers and be scared shettles inside both just suit me fine just o wonder how sessy will reacy wen learns of hitler? well coolie update and plz update soon cya!
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Reviewed By: yami bakura On: March 16, 2004 20:06 PST
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I like your story progression. But I think the next chapter on Nazis is just a little to daring and over the top. This is a very touchy subject to write about. Other than that keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: MysticAngel On: March 16, 2004 18:05 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am really loving the progression of this story. There haven't been any odd moments of OOCness with the characters because you understood the ways they should behave in certain situations. Sometimes the background info you give for the new worlds gets too involved and confusing, but it's not much of a problem to be concerned with - just one criticism; be careful with editing. (I know it's difficult to write and post as quick as we -your humble readers- would like you to AND edit perfectly as well, just a suggestion though!) Anywho, keep up the good work, very spiffy story! :)
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Reviewed By: BlueGreen On: March 14, 2004 20:48 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*shifts nervously* hmmm...i kinda didnt want sess and kagomes's first time together to be so...is 'wild' the right word? im hoping that the 2nd time will be a little calmer. ANYWAY. enough of that. i LOVE this story!! its so kawaii! :D great job
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Reviewed By: BlueGreen On: March 14, 2004 20:48 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*shifts nervously* hmmm...i kinda didnt want sess and kagomes's first time together to be so...is 'wild' the right word? im hoping that the 2nd time will be a little calmer. ANYWAY. enough of that. i LOVE this story!! its so kawaii! :D great job
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Reviewed By: Lady Naimoi On: March 14, 2004 18:57 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love ur story. i could never write like this keep it up
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Title: WOW WOW WOW
Reviewed By: sango1390 On: March 14, 2004 14:30 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i think im going to be out of underwear for a long time! but it was worth it because i love your stories!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Inari-foxgoddess(not logged on) On: March 14, 2004 14:04 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! GREAT CHAPTER! I HOPE YOU UPDATE SOON
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Reviewed By: Kisagurl On: March 14, 2004 13:17 PST
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This fanfic is very good and I hope you keep on updating. *eye twitches* When are Sessy and kag goning to get it on! Oh, and I really really love your story. The whole world switching thing is good for keeping readers on their toes. I have read other stories that get boring but yours get more interesting. Keep up the good work. ~_^
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Reviewed By: Kitsune_Bi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2004 10:57 PST
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O_O
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Reviewed By: 12blue12(logged off) On: March 14, 2004 10:26 PST
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coolie update hope u update soon! Also i hope sessy is not to badly um harmd (?) for being a magicall creature...poor fluffers! well then cya!
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Reviewed By: lazerbeam12345 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2004 09:06 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of only 4 fanfics that I have ever found to be this good. I check every night to see if there has been an update! Keep up the fantastic work!
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Reviewed By: FrbddnAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2004 18:06 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was very good. cant wait for the next chapter. please update son
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Title: so sweet
Reviewed By: kikiyo On: March 12, 2004 21:45 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
you have such a way with words that i can never achive in my life, plus i like your story a lot
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Reviewed By: Yami Bakura On: March 12, 2004 20:01 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My gosh why did you stop now...I hate having to wait for updates. Please write more I love this story and check for updates all the time.And thats saying alot i'm usually not this persistant. Use that great writers brain of yours and finsish this story. I just can't wait. :-D
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