| "Kagome! Where are you?!" Reviews/Comments [ 409 ] |
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Title: Very well written
Reviewed By: ady anhee 999 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2004 07:27 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the story. Demon speed is my thought. They where in shock with how fast he was. Have him grab her, run to the tent with the shards, her bag, and box. Then activate the box. The army wouldn't know where they went and it would give them the time to collect what they need to go. But that is my thoughts on what would happen. (although I don't know if she could convince Sess to do it.) Anyways, can't wait to read more. :) TTFN Lady Banshee 999
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Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin *not logged in 'cause mm isn't admitting that's she's logged in when she is, so BOO on MM!!!* On: February 11, 2004 00:02 PST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Okay... I think I understood the middle earth details this time. I like that Kagome learned a language song. Very neat. Umm.. I also liked the waffiness. Very nice. But not enough! *lol* It never is enough... lots of action. I'm glad that they keep tying. It's hilarious! Lemme see... *shivers* I couldn't quite imagine Sesshoumaru after the battle. *sniffles* Loved the whine that touched the hearts of the elves. What should she do??? Uh.... I say the best of both. Protect the elf guy by taking the brunt of the attack. She shouldn't attack Sesshoumaru. I just couldn't bear it... have her die a few more times as long as he's got Tenseiga? I think I can handle that. *shrugs* Up to you, though. I'd be more descriptive, but it's around 1am here. I need to try and sleep now. I wish I could've wrote something. I hope you write more of this soon. *waves while yawning* Night! Third option sounds best to me right now.
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Reviewed By: gg On: February 10, 2004 21:09 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the details that you put into your story. It makes the story come to life for me. I dont think that Kagome should attack Sess b/c that would be totally bad and real friends dont hurt eacother. Sess should just fight the god guy and while they are occupied Kagome should get the cube and shards. Keep posting.
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Reviewed By: Sessy-san [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2004 20:02 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
go with the third choice! whatever that is cuz the 1st two dont sound like anything Kagome would do at all. Well on to a better note, update really soon! I luv this stry. one of the best fanfictions I've ever read! and I mean it!
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Reviewed By: BRL On: February 10, 2004 18:45 PST
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YES! Another excellent chapter, if I may say! I think, what would be cool (if only a bit drama-disapointing) would be to have them somehow get a hold of the cube and transport themselves out of Middle Earth...It HAS been two days, right? I mean, if you need a reason, perhaps consider the fact that if they are in the history of Middle Earth, if they stick around to long, they could change the history! (provided that you are basing it off of "real worlds" written about by authors. if you aren't, then please ignore what I've just said) Something else maybe I would like to request, would be maybe have them go to Harry Potter/Hogwarts world? I think that would be absolutley HILARIOUS! Drama could be built up easily, I think in that case. Anyhow, maybe just think on it. in the mean time, ttyl! ~Black Rose Lady red_flame204@hotmail.com
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Title: ch 28
Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2004 23:13 PST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Booo! This chapter title sucks! *heh* But the chapter itself ROCKED!! I love it when they save themselves and then each other. It's SO much better than only one of them being the hero. *snickers* I'm am SO proud of Kagome for knowing Sess THAT well! *wink wink* Yeah, I was an itsy bitsy bit confused about some of the Tolkein details... but I remembered what the Trolls and the Balrog are. (lucky me) But that doesn't mean it wasn't enjoyable. *lmafao* Sauron is a wuss. A dumb, stupid, wuss. When will he learn that he will always lose??? No waff??? BOOOOOOOOO! *heh* Just kidding. Yeah, I got a feeling that the whole Aragorn/Arwen and that princess chick love triangle wasn't in the book. So is the story Aragorn tells the hobbits about the man and the elf really about Beren & Luthein?? *shrugs* Just wondering. Yeah. What can I say... I'm a girl. So, yes, I love waff and romance... particulary the DETAILS of it. *heh* Not like that you perve... I just like character depth. I think you're doing pretty well with Sesshoumaru and Kagome's romantic development thus far. Keep it up! ^_^ (Yeah, I know you said you wouldn't include much waff in the Tolkein-verse... but I can hope, can't I? At least ONE scene in a room or dungeon where they get to hold each other? They wake up, relieved, and crush each other in a hug? Please?? I'll review more timely next time? Heck, I'd proofread for you-- though I'm the worst at it:P)
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Title: *roflmfao while reading ch 27*
Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2004 22:42 PST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
///`Great . . . I've been with Inu-yasha how long? And I've always had a shirt and skirt. I'm with Sesshomaru and in less than two weeks, I reduced to a bra, a panty and a ripped skirt.' She shakes her head, "is there some god wanting me nude?"/// *heh heh heh* No, Kagome, we just want you and Sesshoumaru makin' hot sweet love, is all. *smirk* I'm sorry... those lines just kicked major ass!! ^_~ And it fits since Kagome's kicking ass as well! I told you she didn't need Sesshoumaru to save her. ;) *looks at the next chapter's title; gulp* Yet.
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Reviewed By: Chibi Methos(not logged in) On: February 09, 2004 11:21 PST
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AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! you keep stopping! i command you to write and write til the story is finished. No eating ! nO sleeping! only write!! *huff huff* sorry, i needed to get that out of my system. great chapter! ^_^x
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Reviewed By: StormAZ [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2004 22:04 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Being somewhat of a Tolkien fanatic myself, I can honestly applaud the effort that you put into that chapter! It came across as well as any of the Tolkien fight stories (which is what I'm assuming you were going for). Well, it did to me anyway and since I own most of the collective works and have read them all (at least once) at one point or another :::glances at her well-worn library of favorites::: I think I'm as qualified as any reader/non-professional to say that ^_^ Now, to see what happens next.... :::looks through her email for another update notification...::: ^_~
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Reviewed By: BRL On: February 08, 2004 17:16 PST
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Oh, yay! I'm the 100 reveiwer!...I'm pretty sure, anyways. I have a question, though. Why was Kagome only in her underthings when she was in Sauron's room? I forget...was that all she had on in the first place, or did he remove whatever else clothes she had on? ~Black Rose Lady
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Reviewed By: InsaneAuthoress [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2004 16:37 PST
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This is a great chapter! I love the Tolken to but i only read LOTR and the Hobbit so im a bit confused. So now ill have to go find those books! ^_~ can't wait for an update!
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Reviewed By: blackberry [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2004 15:48 PST
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That rocked! I think that these sequences in Middle Earth are my favorites so far of the various worlds and time periods you've covered. I'm so glad you're not done with it yet--can't wait to see fight with the Balrog, though the fights with Sauron, the werewolves and even the orcs have been excellent. (By the way, did you get a beta reader? If yes, good--your spelling and grammar look better.) Looking forward to seeing your next chapter!
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Reviewed By: 12blue12(logged off) On: February 08, 2004 10:53 PST
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loved the latest update really really coolie had a lot of action loved that well i hope u can update soon cuz the next chappie sounds good cya!
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Reviewed By: Atliskflower On: February 07, 2004 10:43 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it! I can't wait to read more! I was hooked from the start. When you up date send me an e-mail at Atliskflower@yahoo.com. ~Atliskflower~
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Title: make better
Reviewed By: sangogurl On: February 07, 2004 05:38 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
could you please make this world go in the next chapter because lord of the rings is nice and everything but kinda gets boring after a while
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