| "Kagome! Where are you?!" Reviews/Comments [ 409 ] |
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Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin *Duo must never sign in either* On: January 11, 2004 22:31 PST
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And since I forgot to tell you... the pace is fine with me! I like it when they're friends first. But they're MORE than friends-- it's SO obvious! It took me six or so months of dating my first boyfriend before-- well, you know. *blushes and runs off to dream of Sesshoumaru*
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Title: Just a few bits of random insane thoughts...
Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin *all should be used to her never signing in* On: January 11, 2004 22:22 PST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Lots of commas in this chapter. But moving on... I really like this chapter. I like lots of dialogue and thoughts. *shrugs* Maybe that's just me. I tend to write too much of it, though. *blinks* Your impression of Sesshoumaru's mother is different than most. Poor Sesshy. Kagome likes to lick her lips. *lol* Not that I blame her... she was having a sex chat with Sesshoumaru. I could NEVER do that. Damn, I keep forgetting to finish your fertility festival story. So she and Inu DO do it *heh*... that kind of spoiled it for me. She should be with Sesshoumaru!!! About the world rejects *heh* I like that you're sharing them with us. I didn't know what world you were talking about... but the idea of Sess/Kag taking a vacation/honeymoon on ANY continent making love intrigues me. ^.~ I saw the movie "Anna and the King" last week. That movie was VERY good. Chow Yun Fat (did I spell that right?) has a nice smile. *heh* I could SO see Kagome dancing with Sesshoumaru. And him saying the best line of the movie... (which I can't quote, but I'll give you the point of) "I never knew how a Western man could love only one woman. Now I know." That is SO Sess!!! Well, if he had 67 kids or whatever the number was. *lol* But then, that was Siam. He even said something like "Emperor of China has (whatever #) children. But he didn't spend half his life in a monastery. I have to catch up." *lol* I need to focus... if I have enough time on my hands to write all this crap down... then I SHOULD have been reading that story. I think I'll go read what I can of it now. Write more! ^_^
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Reviewed By: yasha [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2004 19:29 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great fic, and i think the pace is fine cuz even thought it is like 19 chappies it's really only bin bout a week right? yea, i don't think something could happen that quickly either, anyways keep up the good work!
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Title: sessy-san
Reviewed By: Sessy-san [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2004 15:12 PST
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I've been reading ur stry from the begining! i luv the way its goin! the travlin wrolds is cool! cant wait 4 u to update!!!! ^-^
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Reviewed By: anime otaku 58319 On: January 11, 2004 12:05 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really funny fic. You've actually put a lot of work into it. Ican't wait for your next update. Bye.
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Reviewed By: Midnight001 On: January 09, 2004 23:29 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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*Great!* I think you are going at a good pace BUT! it would be nice to see some action start to go on between the two. I seriously love your fiction. Your so great!
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Reviewed By: ;) On: January 09, 2004 13:45 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i dont think your going to fast. i think it is an awesome story! you must update soon!! please!!!!:)
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Reviewed By: White Tiger Princess (not logged in) On: January 09, 2004 00:32 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story and everything, but…your going to Slow!!! >< its already been 19 chappies and all the have is the beginning of friendship!! You think you could speed it up a little? Pleassss…well update soon, k! cant wait for the next chappy! =^-^= W.T.P.
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Title: I needed something larger than a "10" for Enjoyment Factor
Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin *does she EVER log in?* On: January 08, 2004 23:03 PST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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*sniffles* That was SO sweet... can you tell I'm not only a hentai but a hopeless romantic? Yuppers, I'm guilty. But I like angst too. Sesshoumaru's mememories held that. His dad was an evil son of witch. Did he change after he met Inuyasha's mother? Just wondering. Despite the like of action. (I NEED some violence/fighting/horror every once in awhile too) Sorry for the spelling/grammar rating... maybe I'm just seeing things again. Anyway... my point, as usual, is that I like this story and can't wait for you to update it next week. ^_^
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Title: Wow....keep up the great work and update!!
Reviewed By: Psycho Demoness On: January 08, 2004 21:13 PST
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I really like this story. I happen to love Fluffy/Kagome fanfics. I'm such a sucker for them...anyways I think that at first the relationship was building too slow and I think you should go a little faster. I really want them to be together!! *sniff* So keep it up and update as often as you can! Thank ya! Ja ne!
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Title: Kagome! Where are you?!
Reviewed By: Edge [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2004 20:26 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww, you made Sesshomaru so soft now! Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: Chibi Methos (not logged in) On: January 07, 2004 21:53 PST
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wow! I so love this story. T_T; I have to cry though, cause the chapter was so short. I'll keep checking back for updates. I think I'll have a look at "Shard" while I'm waiting.
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Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin *still not logged in, but still snowbound* On: January 07, 2004 21:45 PST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
*grins* Why do I get all the boring jobs like READING fanfics about Sesshoumaru instead of living in his lustful side... *blinks* I did NOT just say that out loud. ANYway... I liked the sides of Sess in this chapter. I thought it was a little rushed, overall, but still pretty good. The lustful side was still the best part. In the library when Kagome got some of his memories, I expected her to absorb them instead of return them to him. Maybe there's still a residule memory inside her. *shrugs* Go Kagome! Way to bargain with lustful Sesshy! ;) I'm holding you to that, btw. ^_~ The next world should be interesting... that preview is making me think already. So the spirit of the cube still exists... it's just no longer inside Sesshoumaru. Gotcha. Take time to write the next chapter, if you need it. I, myself, am guilty of super duper neglect of my unfinished stories. When I get going on one that I really like... it's hard to finish the others where I'm lacking inspiration. (Can you tell I'm an Abstract Random?) Good luck and keep the chapters coming! ^_^
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Title: C'mon no suspense!!
Reviewed By: Melli [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2004 10:34 PST
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UPDATE!!!!! Alright, you can update when you can. I'll read your story A Shard in Kyoto while I'm waiting.
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Title: Awww so cruel!!!
Reviewed By: Melli [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2004 18:16 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're soooooooooo cruel!!!! You left me at a cliffy!!!! Anywayz, I love your story and URGE you to continue it. UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!
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