| "Crawford's Pet" Reviews/Comments [ 28 ] |
Title: Update?
Reviewed By: Vaya [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2006 23:45 CST
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I really like this story, could you update sometime please?
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Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2005 18:51 CST
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i'm trying so hard not to harass you for an update but it's not working, but then again i saw my last plea was in september...so i beg again please update
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Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2005 08:24 CDT
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oh my! this has to be among the best yohji torture i've ever read or actually is the best. but you need to finish this please. don't leave me suffering...
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Reviewed By: Na-chan On: July 19, 2005 04:27 CDT
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PLEEEEEEEAASEE...... UPDAAAATEE!! >_<
I like it when Youji's being tortured, heheh... (0_o)
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Title: Oh my...
Reviewed By: Andartha [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2005 15:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
...this has to be one of the best yaoi / non-con fictions out there that I've ever read. For me, it ranks right up there with some of the deviously wonderful stuff that P.L.Nunn or Chalcedony Cross write. It has me tingling with anticipation and dread and I my palms sweating. Yohji's fear and rebellion, Crawford's unrelenting resolve to have him....ah...to be wanted that much...*gnaws at her fingernails* and damn, what is it with Schuldig and Nagi? Quote Crawford on the subject of Mastermind: "Prodigy, I expect you to keep him under control. If you can't, maybe you should reconsider your bond."...hmm...interesting.
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Reviewed By: yvy On: March 27, 2005 19:50 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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sweet, please update, dont let farfie rape him
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Reviewed By: Beysie (it won't let me log in!) On: January 20, 2005 22:00 CST
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I've decided to re-read this... I do wish you would update this! You have me so hooked on your story, and it's been so long since you've done anything with this. *wails* Please, please update this story! I so need to know what will happen to Yohji...
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Reviewed By: Flamingolo [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2005 16:39 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the best WK fics I've read; very nice job. I was particularly impressed with Yohji, you've done an amazing job working with the complexities of his character. Love the depth with which you've written the dialogue, very intelligently reflecting the characters without being superficial. I'm really looking forward to an update...poor Yotan seems to be thoroughly screwed, ne?
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Title: !!
Reviewed By: mal On: December 13, 2004 02:53 CST
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Awesome! I just love your fic! :) Can't wait to read what's going to happen next! Please update? *puppy eyes*
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Title: :P
Reviewed By: Sloez On: December 03, 2004 16:02 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU NAUGHTY NAUGHTY GIRL!!!!!!! (or boy, who knows....) can't... stop.... reading.... AAAAAAAAAAAH *please continue??? ne? ne? ne?*
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Reviewed By: jukebox_csi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2004 19:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is HORRIBLE..and I couldn't stop reading (*grin*). OMG poor Yohji. I hope you update soon cause I'm dying to see what happens next. You really have a talent. I've enjoyed several of your stories going all the way back to my fav X-men pairing (Wolverine/Gambit) and your Games story as well as your Saiyuki Precious Whore story. Good job as usual!
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Reviewed By: arrianni On: November 19, 2004 18:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I couldn't stop reading you fic ! Loved it and can't wait for whats gonna happen next. Only a few times I found myself getting confused over who was talking (making me re-read it). ^________^ Impatiently waiting for the rest...
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Reviewed By: PinkWhirlWind [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2004 19:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was very nifty! I will have to go and write something with Weiss now. very lovely and inspiring.
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Title: Kudos to you!
Reviewed By: Vampire Louis [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2004 23:05 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh goodness! Please Please write more... I must know what happens! What will Crawford do to Yohji? Does Schuldig really want to help? And what of the rest of Weiss? Please continue! Your form of writing is as addictive as the story and I need more to fill this sudden craving *chuckles*. Okay that sounds desperate but I would really like to read this story all the way to the end. If you go on, you'll have my encouragement and support behind you the whole way ^_^! VL
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Reviewed By: Beysie [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2004 17:54 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is SOOOOOOOOOO awsome! I can't help but feel sorry for Yoji... yet I can't wait to see what Brad has up his sleeve next to torture the bishie with! I'm sadistic, that's it... Ok, please you have to update soon!
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Reviewed By: ~kyou On: November 16, 2004 10:40 CST
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Wow. Poor Yohji! I hate this fic, and yet I couldn't stop reading it. Enthralling. Hope you don't take too much time between updates, cause I wanna know how far you take him, and how you take him back. Cause you're taking him back, righ? RIGHT?
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Reviewed By: melaniesoong(too lazy to sign in) On: November 15, 2004 08:37 CST
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Oh, wow. That was hot, sometimes disturbing and so very kinky. I loved it!!! Do I have to get on my knees and beg to make you write more soon? Because I would! ^_^ Anyway, what was that with Schuldig and Nagi at the end of the 3rd chapter? Hhm, while the Crawford x Yohji pairing in this fic is definitely very very interesting, I especially liked the Schu x Yohji bits. ....At the risk of repeating myself, please write more as soon as you can!!!
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Reviewed By: Tygrrlyli578 On: November 15, 2004 07:22 CST
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Thank you!!! This made the entirity of my day. You rock. Much love is felt toward you. Thank you thank you ^_^!!! And I love the relathionships between the guys like how Schu seems to in a way be on Yohji's side, Naoe is in his own little realm and how everyone interacts and stuff. Very cool.
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Reviewed By: Meandering [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2004 01:03 CDT
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I clicked around at the end, hoping against hope for another page. WHERE IS IT?!
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Title: technicality
Reviewed By: Tygrrlyli578 On: March 10, 2004 17:32 CST
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At one point, Yohji's coat drops to the ground (after Schu takes it off of him), however, later Yohji's coat is parted and what not. So, that might want to be fixed: whether the coat is on or off.
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Title: PS
Reviewed By: Tygrrlyli578 On: December 01, 2003 07:26 CST
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This was the third time of my reading this fic in the past 12 hours. Yes I am just that pitiful, but that more so means that this fic is just that good. Just so you know and all ^_^
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Reviewed By: Tygrrlyli578 On: December 01, 2003 07:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
...Oh COOL! I really love this. Very very cool concept, though not totally original, very originally portrayed. Amazing writing, and everybody is beautifully in character. Hell, even if they weren't, this would still be amazing. Please do keep writing, I love this ^_^
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Reviewed By: Jade Green (too lazy to log in) On: December 01, 2003 02:40 CST
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O.O *mewls* Poor Yotan! I must have more! *paws at the story* Onegai?
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Reviewed By: WK On: November 29, 2003 14:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG this fic was frakin' awesome!! I love it to pieces~ The plot is so original and I love the way you build the characters if Weiss and Swartz. Aya x Youji fan, so I'm really looking forward to reading about aya getting Youji back^^ and i like the little hints you dropped along the way that Aya might feel something more for him, like when he threw his katana against the car. And of course, the scenes with Yohji and Schuldich were very YuMmY~ and I can't wait to see what Crawford has in store for Yo-tan *cackles* PLEASE write more soon, I can't wait to read what happens next, I'll be looking for the next chapter every day^^V GREAT job~
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Reviewed By: Quarter On: November 29, 2003 11:37 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
"This was so not good." Your last line was an understatement. I hope you will continue this story.
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Reviewed By: Merriweather On: November 28, 2003 18:11 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. Right into the thick of things. I don't blame Yohji for not going with Crawford's offer when he had a choice. He's going to need help, I think, but Schwartz has left Weiss in poor condition to mount a rescue. I hope you post more of this story.
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Reviewed By: sagelibra On: November 25, 2003 07:07 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
MORE!MORE!MORE!
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Title: Not Shibby!!
Reviewed By: Talyssa_ On: November 25, 2003 06:04 CST
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That was not shibby at ALL! I mean, it was like waving a sign saying "here there be nummerful smut! All who want, follow" and then taking the hundreds of followers to an abandoned warehouse and saying "er, yeah it'll be along eventually...." See? not shibby at ALL. Now if you had more of this chillin on your hd somewhere and you posted it, oh say, NOW, that would be nice. Crawford doesn't get nearly enough sex in my opinion. At least not with Yohji or Aya....^_^ Anyway in case you couldn't tell, this was good, i'd like the rest now please. Post soon and maybe i'll put you on my list of shibbyness. Unless the next post is a cliffhanger-y one too???????
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