| "Yu Gi Oh does the lost boys" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Drof Tceferp [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2005 20:26 CDT
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??? You posted the same chapter twice, it looks like...Oh yeah, and this is possible the worst example of mauling the English language I have EVER seen. What the hell is an 'abosin'? Read a dictionary, why dont'cha? I'm sorry, I don't normally do this, but this is just SAD. Seriously. Learn to spell, and develop plots. Okay? It might be good then.
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Reviewed By: Vampire Inuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2004 18:28 CST
Comment/Review:
UPDATE SOON!! UPDATE SOON!!! UPDATE SOON!!! PLZ UPDATE SOON!!!
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Reviewed By: Vampire Inuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2004 19:00 CST
Comment/Review:
PLZ UPDATE SOON!!! Vampire Inuyasha
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Reviewed By: Vampire Inuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2003 22:11 CST
Comment/Review:
Hello again I forgot to add sopme thing in my other review can I be inyour story? can I be Yugi's Vitim so then I can Bite yami. Vampire Inuyasha
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Reviewed By: Vampire Inuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2003 19:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool story I really like it please make some more chapters soon Vampire Inuyasha
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