| "Sleeping Mistake" Reviews/Comments [ 110 ] |
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Reviewed By: reader1 On: April 06, 2005 15:04 CDT
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it's been 7 months. are you ever going to update again?
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Reviewed By: Foreva Following!!!! On: February 24, 2005 23:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, first off, IY's sword is spelled "Tetsusaiga" in the anime and english manga, but it's actually supposed to be "Tessaiga" because there's a hard pause between Te and Saiga. When they romanized it, I guess they counted the "tsu" as part of the name instead of making it a hard pause like it's supposed to be. When you write in Japanese, hard pauses are dictated by a small "tsu" character. Otherwise, creative. And yes, it is "Kaede" and "KoUga"
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Title: Simply irrestiable
Reviewed By: FeralYaguara [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2005 18:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You've done a wonderful job so far! Please keep writing more! It's such a cute story. Kagome and Inu Yasha have always deserved to love each other freely.
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Reviewed By: FeralYaguara [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2005 18:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You've done a wonderful job so far! Please keep writing more! It's such a cute story. Kagome and Inu Yasha have always deserved to love each other freely.
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Title: Love your story
Reviewed By: inulover^-^ On: November 28, 2004 20:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg!!! I love your story and I can't wait till you update more...I know you have a life of your own but you have to understand that some of our lives are reading your story! Please update as fast as you can! Love your story.
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Title: Sleeping Mistake
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer On: November 20, 2004 18:35 CST
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Title: Sleeping Mistake
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer On: November 03, 2004 12:54 CST
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: Doujo [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2004 22:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
2 months... 2 MONTHS! That's too long... sniff please update soon, I really like this fic and I want you to continue it! I beg you! And I'm sure I'm not the only one who's begging you! I'm sure there's plenty other people who are begging you, but silently cuz they're too shy or something... pretty pretty please, update soon!! (please?)
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Reviewed By: Ikiwi (not logged in) On: September 01, 2004 20:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! Very good fic so far! Please update ASAP! I need to know what happens next. Great lemons, hehe! Very very good story!
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Reviewed By: Jet_black [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2004 21:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
oooooooowwwwww very very good story!!!! I love it!!!!! update REAL soon!!!
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Reviewed By: sunshine07 On: August 29, 2004 23:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
that was a GREAT chappy!!!! plz let shippo come back and PLZ let him accept the fact that inuyasha and kagome are together and be supportive!!!!!!! PLZ let Miroku stay faithful to Sango and let her know he really loves her!!!!! plz update soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: Xander_b [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2004 04:11 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice fic.I am looking forward to the next chapter
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Title: Finally, i get why the chaps called that, lol
Reviewed By: Inus_Kagome_Forever , not signed in On: August 29, 2004 01:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY, such a good lemon! So glad! Im sorry, i would write a bunch more stuff about how good your story is but, South Park is on, lol. I really want to watch it! But your story is hecka good and i love it! Cant wait for the next chaP!
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Title: what's that word?
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn (not signed in) On: August 29, 2004 00:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
what's the word i'm lookin for?......oh yea..... 'WOW'........... yup i think that sum's this up well good job and keep up the good work and update again soon pleasE?
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2004 23:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
this is a great fanfic please update soon
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