| "Sleeping Mistake" Reviews/Comments [ 110 ] |
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Reviewed By: dmak [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2004 18:39 CDT
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Hi! I read what you said about looking at a fic and then not reviewing it, and I realised that you're right. I do that a lot, so I'd like to review your fan fic. I really like the idea of doing the first person thing with everyone, it's a different idea. How did you come up with the idea for your fic? I just started writing my first one, and it took me FOREVER to think of a good idea! (it's called What If, in case you're interested) Here's my email address, if you want it: the_real_survivor@hotmail.com
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Reviewed By: sm On: June 12, 2004 03:41 CDT
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Excellent story. Looking forward to next chapter.
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Reviewed By: zoingy On: June 10, 2004 18:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aw comeon... that cliffy was so unfair.... (cries) Well update soon!!! Great story keep it up!!! signed: zoingy
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Title: macbaby1
Reviewed By: macbaby1 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2004 23:58 CDT
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Great fic! Please update soon, I have been keeping up with it for some time, just haven't left any reviews. I do think you need to kill that damn Kikyo!!
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Reviewed By: SexyChicklet17 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2004 22:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey, that was a really good fic!! but you need to update a little more. the thing that most confused me was when the veiw kept on changing...sometimes its hard to tell who is saying all of it because it doesn't say who's POV it is. if you want my advice i think that maybe you should just do third person narrarrator...its A LOT easier to understand(although in my fic i chose to do the character's POV but now i sorta regret it). Okay, well email me if you want at: PUNKPRINZEZZ84@AOL.COM P.S. read my fic too if you want!!It called: Me, Kagome?! thnx, bye!! Sexychicklet17
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Reviewed By: sunshine161820 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2004 16:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!! its great!!!!!!!!! PLZ update SOON!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2004 22:21 CDT
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this is a great fanfic please update soon
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Reviewed By: jtcl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2004 01:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I real like reading this story I can not want in still you write the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2004 21:00 CDT
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this is great fanfic please update soon
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Reviewed By: notzathros On: May 03, 2004 19:07 CDT
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I like the way you've written this from everyone's point of view. Makes for an interesting read. Thanks. Looking forward to more.
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Reviewed By: jynnantonnix [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2004 18:11 CDT
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Sugoi! You're torturing my mind, I love it! Katana is cool but he chills my blood. >_< BRR!
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Reviewed By: NetealiaFoxwood [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2004 18:02 CDT
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more more please i need more! update soon...
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2004 00:41 CDT
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this is a great fanfic please update soon
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Title: Weeeeeeeeeelllllllll
Reviewed By: GeminiElf [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2004 23:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Miroku and Sango status: GET IT ON!!!! No, I don't know what you mean, but whatever. Koga status: KILL HIM OFF THE FRIGGIN FANFIC! Otherwise, this story rocks. Sess knows his brother? Well, you learn something new everyday!
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Reviewed By: Gittelbug [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2004 22:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm enjoying it so far. keep koga alive hes more interrsting..
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