| "Sleeping Mistake" Reviews/Comments [ 110 ] |
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Title: Cute, funny, sad, sexy, and twisty!!!
Reviewed By: Vellakitty [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2004 08:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cute, funny, sad, sexy, and down right twisted....I love it!!!!! Please up date ASAP!!! Man this is one hell of a fic!!! I love the way you make all the stuff I wrote at the top mix in together!! Its so cool!!! You got to love this fic!!! That is, if you like fics that have Inu&Kag couples and twists in it!!! I can't, but will, wait for your next up date!!! Well bye for now!!! ^-__-^
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Reviewed By: Chokoreeto Ame [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2004 11:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love the idea but to be honest the shifting povs gets a bit confusing at times. try to specify who's talking, other than that keep it up. and go write another chapter! oh and incase ur still not sure her name is kaede, thanks!
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Reviewed By: zuppy70 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2004 19:47 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm glade inu and kag are ok! Update soon!!! I really like your story!!! Keep it up! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Mirokuslover On: January 19, 2004 17:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVE IT!!
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Reviewed By: Inu Girl On: January 11, 2004 14:32 CST
Comment/Review:
you suck you could have writen more and made the chapter longer
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Title: asa
Reviewed By: Nne On: January 06, 2004 17:05 CST
Comment/Review:
MORELEMONEYGOODNESS,MY,SPACE,BAR,IS,BROKEN!
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Reviewed By: Kashino-sama On: January 06, 2004 16:44 CST
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What the hell do you mean by Did she just do what i think she did??!?!?! you wrote the damn story!!!!
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Title: bad japanese, good fic
Reviewed By: Hino Mitsukiko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2004 00:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First, here are all the names that you might spell wrong b/c of the anime: Kouga-Koga Kikyou-Kikyo Myouga-Myoga Shippou-Shippo Sesshoumaru-Sesshomaru Houjou-Hojo Souta-Sota Kirara-Kilala Saimyoushou-Saimyosho Toutousai-Totosai Kaede-Kaeda
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Reviewed By: The Fallen Angel of Death [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2004 08:28 CST
Comment/Review:
No lemon, lime. lemon and lime totally different. its kAedE not kieda. and myoga. any ways, i want you to continue this story soon please? pretty please? pretty please with sugar and cherries on top? and a side plate of ramen, that stuff is the best. ja ne.
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Reviewed By: synthetichopes On: December 29, 2003 20:56 CST
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its actually kaede. i don't know where you got the a at the end. other than that, kinky.
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Reviewed By: Amethyst [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2003 12:10 CST
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0_0 Bad Kagome.
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Title: JESUS!
Reviewed By: angel0fs0rr0w666 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2003 05:10 CST
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for heavens sake, stop doing that! what the hell happens? its getting freakishly annoying, i only do that coz i run out of ideas... eheheh, yea, well. im-a pa-ra-nah in the am-a-zon! ^_^
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Reviewed By: misticknight2002 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2003 02:23 CST
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WHAT!!! Hey that isn't fair, makeing a cliffhanger right in the middle of a story. Jeez, now I'm annoyed. What am I supposed to do until you update, huh? Well damn, *growls* you had best be updateing soon, because if there is one thing I hate more than being rushed it's haveing to wait. Well, keep writing.^-^
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Reviewed By: Inu Gril On: December 27, 2003 19:39 CST
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herry up and wright more you sneke little yeller belly snake in the grass no more cliffys
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Title: You are evil
Reviewed By: Inuyasha is a tottal Hotty On: December 21, 2003 02:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are plan ev il. YOU MUST UPDATE NOW OR I WILL HUNT YOU DOWN WITH A GUN AND SHOT YOUR HEAD OFF.AND YOU CAN FIND OPUT WERE THEY LIVE JUST BY TRACING THE LINE
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