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Reviewed By: jazzyca [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2004 18:49 CST
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awesome! but where's the lemon?! chapters could be a bit longer. i understand that you write these really late. but still, make it a lil over 3 scenes per chapter. still, great story....but where's the lemon? sorry, i'm obsessed with lemons -_-;
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Title: good
Reviewed By: Jazzyca [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2004 18:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
where\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\'s the lemon!!! great story. could you make the chapters maybe a bit longer? still, awesome! love it! needs lemon though...sorry, i\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\'m obsessed with lemons -_-;
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Title: YEAY!!
Reviewed By: Kikyou_104 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2004 21:54 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like you fic how did he get hurt or did you say that already and i missed it completely well i love this fic it one of my faves. and can kagome hold her booze well update soon pleaze pleaze i really do want to know wats gunna happen and when sessy finds out i wonder how he is going to reacted ( i still want kagome and yasha to be togetherin the end though lol) ok well that was a long review your #1 reader/fan lol
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Title: Inuyasha lover
Reviewed By: Inuyasha_For_Ever [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2004 17:57 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can not believe you put that Kagome thought Inuyasha was gay!!! That shit keeps making me laugh! Its great but can you get on with the GOD DAMN LEMON!!! I am a HENTAI meaning I LOVE LEMONS. Your doing great so far keep it up or you'll hear a lot of cursing and threats from me, Fang
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Title: good stuff
Reviewed By: Fallin Dark Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2004 23:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ilove it write more its great ive you dont write more itll haunt you later or more acuratly i will *has evil gleam n eye* so write more its really good
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Reviewed By: cutie_pie_2101_1012 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2004 21:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i likie please update really really soon
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Reviewed By: Faye273 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2004 16:20 CST
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I'm sorry you don't like this story anymore, but I do. This is the only really AU fic I've read (and I read lots of IY fics... so that's saying something). I really like this concept and I hope you find your "second wind" for this story. Even if you don't, I hope you have the heart to not let it end poorly for all of us who love it. Can't wait to see what you have planned next!
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Reviewed By: Kagome59 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2004 15:15 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
great really great plot and all those other things but i may suggest in putting a little more felling into it sence that does matter but other than that your a great writer!
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Title: GOMEN
Reviewed By: Crim_R [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2004 18:49 CST
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sorry i havnt been able to update ina while i am in NC and away from home so this isnt my computer and.. yeah. I kinda dont have all my files here and everything. sorry, ill post more when i get home. c ya.
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Reviewed By: Crim_R [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2004 18:47 CST
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Reviewed By: Taka [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2003 23:32 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE UPDATE PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
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Title: AWSOME
Reviewed By: Kikyou_104 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2003 16:00 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I likey this is a relly good fic!! pleaze write more soon cuz i relly want to see how yasha and kagos relationship is gunna grow how is fluffy gunna react ect.. pleaz updated soon
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Reviewed By: Crim_R [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2003 22:11 CST
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Reviewed By: Laura-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2003 11:10 CST
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I love it!!! Please continue soon and write a lemon *_* Inu/Kag lemon ^_~ I hate Inu/Kik... she's a bitch ~_~
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Title: ......
Reviewed By: Crim_R [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2003 20:01 CST
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*sigh* here we go again... I just wish this damned thing would work and show me my friggin reviews! I get tired of having to keep posting my own reviews and all...
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