| "Hawaii: Love and Commitment" Reviews/Comments [ 36 ] |
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Title: Administration
Reviewed By: Fanilia [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2005 20:07 CDT
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You must delete the last chapter asking for reader input. You can email those reviewers who have an email link to personally ask, but to leave this up would be a violation of the sites rules, and as stated in the news item of 1-1-05 listed on the fanfictions front page, your account would be terminated. I do not beleive you intended to break the sites rules, so I am posting this and allowing a week for you to remove the last chapter . If not then I will have no option then to terminate the account. Looks like you have a loyal reader base and it would be a shame to terminate an account that has been a part of this site for the last year and a half.~Fanilia
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Reviewed By: FataLFelineOfTheNight [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2005 19:02 CDT
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just think of a REALLY big building with alot of mini stores inside. A few different clothing stores, music stores, even fast food places. thas all a mall really is. hope that helps, plz update.
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Reviewed By: DarkAvenger On: April 09, 2005 22:29 CDT
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oooh... poo, you stopped writting this way back in 2003. It was going so well too. Oh well, authors perogitive I suppose. Anyway, if you ever decide to write more to this let me know via email. cadkitten@gmail.com
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Reviewed By: JC On: September 12, 2004 15:59 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Me again!I thougt you said you were going for the long-hall but you have not updated this fanfic for almost a year; why is that?P.S. Update SOON!! Love: JC
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Reviewed By: Missy-bee [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2004 17:47 CDT
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yeah are you ever going to update this? Man this was a funny story.
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Reviewed By: YinYang236 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2004 15:48 CDT
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You haven't updated since 2003?!?!?!??! Come on, update, update, update.
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Reviewed By: buffaholic On: July 25, 2004 23:16 CDT
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OMG i was sooo excited to read that fic! but then i looked and it was only three chapters!!!! and hasn't been updated since 2003!!!! grrrr i hate that so if you update maybe i'll come back and read but until then..see ya
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Reviewed By: princess_forever [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2004 21:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really like your story please update..I can't wait to read what happenes next.
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Title: sweet
Reviewed By: Lunar_Storm [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2004 03:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
o man please hurry n right more
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Reviewed By: kitty kitsune On: April 19, 2004 21:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
It's me kitty fox or in japenese necko kitsune anyway i'm just here to tell you i love it plz review
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Reviewed By: AMANDA_TRINH On: March 10, 2004 11:27 CST
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O_O WWWWWWWWWWWOOOOOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!THAT WAS WIERD!!!BUT THAT FIC WAS AWESOME!!!!!!I THINK THAT U SHOULD MAKE THE CHAPPY MORE LONGER!!!!!!NO OFFENSE I JUST THINK THAT U SHOULD MAKE IT A LOT MORE EXCITING LIKE KAGOME HAVING A GROUP OF FAN CLUBS WITH A LOT OF BOYS IN THEM AND THAT KAGOME LOOK MEGA HOT 2 ALL OF THE BOYS THAT R IN THE TRIP IN HAWAII!!INUYASHA SHOULD HAVE SOME FAN CLUBS 2 JUST WITH GIRLS IN THEM!!!DO U ACTUALLY KNOW WHAT I MEAN CUZ IF U DON'T I MEANT THAT A LOT OF GUYS SHOULD HAVE A CRUSH ON KAGOME AND THE GIRLS HAVE A CRUSH ON INUYASHA!!I MEAN WHO WOULDN'T HAVE A CRUSH ON INUYASHA!!*DROOLS*PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!PWEASE UPDATE SOON!!
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Reviewed By: LadyHanyou(not signed in) On: February 27, 2004 19:50 CST
Comment/Review:
I love your stories. I'll update mine someday
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Title: hurry up
Reviewed By: Inuyasha is a tottal Hotty On: February 22, 2004 17:29 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you're really slow. I read this story like 7 months sgo. and u haven't added anything PS: I HAVE PMS
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Reviewed By: Anubis_Himura [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2004 18:25 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay! Please update soon I like your story very much ¤_¤
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Reviewed By: lil_sesshi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2004 22:01 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its a very good story i hope you can update it soon
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