| "Camp Koshin" Reviews/Comments [ 283 ] |
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Reviewed By: Sango_Augusto On: June 28, 2004 19:40 CDT
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Great chapter. I love it when Sango Tries to kill Miroku, I mean not like I want him dead. He's cute and kind at heart even if he is a lecher. He just deserves a good beating after he gropes Sango.I mean its just wrong. Please update. Thank you. :)
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Reviewed By: sabriel7 (2 laz to log on) On: June 25, 2004 14:37 CDT
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(Ignore this)
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Title: nicely done
Reviewed By: kornychic™ On: June 25, 2004 14:28 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
haahaa! that was a grreeat chappy! yea the word of the day: One illustrious fox interrupted the moment before anyone noticed each other's interest. yay! i won again! anyway for the point of view things that was hilarious! kagome is nuts lol. keep that up for sure and do the boys's's pov's too (specially sesshomaru...mmm) CHEERS!
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Reviewed By: sabriel7 (2 laz to log on) On: June 24, 2004 01:56 CDT
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Gosh darn comp won't let me c me reviews unless I post! :(
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Reviewed By: Orb (n.o.) On: June 23, 2004 15:21 CDT
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One illustrious fox interrupted WOw! 8 pages!! This was a really goos hcpater, reminded me of my friends lol. we were swimming today. I cant wait for another chapter.
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Reviewed By: Star Fire Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2004 08:07 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Here's the sentence from the story "One illustrious fox interrupted the moment before anyone noticed each other's interest." About the point of view thing I really don't know. When you do point of view you find out more of what that person is thinking, but sometimes when a person writes in pov they leave out some things out of pov. So I really don't know what one I think is better. What you could do is only do it when you think we readers need to know more about what is on thier mind. I hope this helps. Ja for now, Star
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Reviewed By: DatChicAnna [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2004 03:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fic by the way and I hope you update soon. Ja ne ^_^
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Reviewed By: DatChicAnna [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2004 03:47 CDT
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Luckily, for all of them, they were to caught up in their examination to notice each other's starry-eyed (A/N And some lustful *coughMirokucough*) stare. One illustrious fox interrupted the moment before anyone noticed each other's interest.
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Reviewed By: lunar_girl (not logged) On: June 22, 2004 21:48 CDT
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One illustrious fox interrupted the moment before anyone noticed each other's interest. yay! i found it! nice work. update soon.
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Reviewed By: um, I don't know anymore...(angie) On: June 22, 2004 19:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*awwwwww* I loved that chapter! maybe less than the last one..but that was sooo cute! now i wanna go swimming!! later! (maybe i'll find a miroku under water...be vewy vewy qwiet...we'rwe huntin miwoku's...) anyways, before i go to a random pool on a random boat...I'll write the sentence! 'One illustrious fox interruptedthe moment before anyone could notice...me!!' ahh, j/k. so, yea-haw!I have to go shave a mongoose! bye, update ur other fics too!! lmao!!! or is it lmoa...i dono anymore!! wahhh!!! -o- *sniff*
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Reviewed By: CaribMiko03(lazy2signin) On: June 22, 2004 17:39 CDT
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I think that u should continue writing in POV's. It also tells what the characters are thinking. Well u did that before, but i like this way better. Update as soon as u can!!!
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Reviewed By: Kitsu Kurasei On: June 18, 2004 07:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a greatfic with a funny author, what else is there to tell? anywho here is your answer: "At first he thought he must have died in his sleep yesterday and this was heaven since Sango was lying next to him."-Kitsu
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Reviewed By: sabriel7 (2 laz to log on) On: June 06, 2004 20:38 CDT
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Ignore this
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Reviewed By: kornychic [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2004 15:14 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay! i won! great chapter by the way, and i dunno where that fantastical poem is from but i got the word! At first he thought he must have died in his sleep yesterday and this was heaven since Sango was lying next to him. great job! CHEERS
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Reviewed By: sabriel7 (2 laz to log on) On: June 02, 2004 09:35 CDT
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I have to post this everytime i want to see my reviews *sigh* -.-'
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