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Reviewed By: Yochichi(Angie) On: June 01, 2004 22:59 CDT
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(gasps and faints on floor) I really...don't....know....what to...say...um..here's the sentence? 'At first he thought he must have died in his sleep yesterday and this was heaven since Sango was lying next to him.' normally, I wouldn't have written out the whole sentence, but...I HAD TO!!!!! oh, my...god!!!! i hate you kimmy!!! Why do you write so good?! no, seriously, I won't hate for something you do good at(though it's hard not to get envious)so, great job! I think it's funny that Sango kissed miroku, okay, not funny...ADORABLE!!! I loved this chapter! and I really do know that poem b/c when I was at your house doing kareoke (yes, kimmy and I can sing) you said that poem, but you didn't tell me what the book was called! can I please ask a question anyways? I'll give you an inuyasha t-shirt! (i really can) ?:( faces!!! :{) I have a mustache!! you know, I really don't think I want to do my story now, cuz well, it sucks! {:*( (teardrop) Actully, I don't need to ask a question, cuz it will probably ruin the story anyways. now im sad, i want miroku!!! ^o^wahh!!
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Reviewed By: Sango_Augusto [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2004 21:01 CDT
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Very nice. Oh and by the way, if you make this a tragedy i will claw your eyes out and make your life a living hell, so please update. Thanks.
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Reviewed By: Orb (n.o.) On: June 01, 2004 19:03 CDT
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thought he must have died in his sleep yesterday this was sucha funny chapter. poor kagome, she cant ever catch a break. can't wait for the next update. ooooo miroku and sango!! lol
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Reviewed By: lunar_girl (not logged) On: May 31, 2004 15:07 CDT
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At first he thought he must have died in his sleep yesterday and this was heaven since Sango was lying next to him. YAY!! i found it agan. i dont know where the poem came from though... >_< o well. update soon.
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Reviewed By: kuroneko13(to early to log in still tierd) On: May 31, 2004 10:51 CDT
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here is your word. At first he thought he must have died in his sleep yesterday and this was heaven since Sango was lying next to him. haha i thought it was funny when everyone walked in on sango and Miroku plz update soon
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Reviewed By: Star Fire Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2004 05:45 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey here you go and please take less time to update please I really like this story. I liked the part where InuYasha was the pervert when they walked into Sango and Miroku's room, it was funny.At first he thought he must have died in his sleep yesterday and this was heaven since Sango was lying next to him. Oh I also recognized the line "Geeze Sango, it's not like I haven't touched you there before…"It was from the preview on Sat(29) for next Sat(5).Update Soon=^-^=
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Reviewed By: lunar_girl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2004 20:48 CDT
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"Sango, Rin, and Kagome chatted pleasantly as they skated around the rink" i found it too. we were suppose to find the word pleasantly rite? ok then. i found it!
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Reviewed By: lunar_girl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2004 20:44 CDT
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update plz
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Title: I love it-P.S. here is my answer!
Reviewed By: Kitsu Kurasei On: May 09, 2004 00:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it beyond reasoning! How could I not? anyway here's my answer!: Sango, Rin, and Kagome chatted pleasantly as they skated around the rink.
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Reviewed By: sabriel7 (too friken laz to log on, deal) On: May 08, 2004 18:25 CDT
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hey quick pole, do u guys want me to keep this game til the end of the story? Thnx!
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Title: mira
Reviewed By: mira0683 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2004 22:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can barely wait for the next chapter! I hope Miroku lightens up on Inu soon, i feel so bad for him. Keep the chappies coming! =-)
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Reviewed By: sabriel7 (2 lazy to log on) On: May 05, 2004 22:19 CDT
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Guys, READ THE AUTHORS NOTE!! Their good fics I HIGHLY recommend them.
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Reviewed By: Saikotsu On: May 05, 2004 21:17 CDT
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Rozefire is a great author! I've read all those fics and they're incredible beyond beleif... Anyhoo, Rozefire started a new fic cuz she said she had a bit of writer's block on Autumn Bane or somethin, it's called 'The Sinner'. An incredible fic so far and only 2 chapters.
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Title: AWESOME ! ! ! : -)
Reviewed By: michi chan 713 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2004 23:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"sango, rin, and kagome chatted pleasently around the rink" yea i found it!!! please write again soon i realy want to know what's gonna happen next you are such a great writer!!!
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Reviewed By: Kuroneko13 (Too lazy to log in) On: May 03, 2004 18:38 CDT
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Sango, Rin, and Kagome chatted pleasantly as they skated around the rink. there is your word and sentance but any-who update
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