| "Camp Koshin" Reviews/Comments [ 283 ] |
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Reviewed By: Star Fire Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2004 14:19 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*weep weep* why would some one flame you? maybe they don't have a life and expect you to not have one to. I mean golly gee. That was just mean. Don't expect one from me I love this story. any who here is the line. "Rin stuck out her tongue playfully as the girls tittered over their victory, leaving the guys to sulk behind them."
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Reviewed By: Dreamfox WindWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2004 21:42 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Rin stuck out her tongue playfully as the girls tittered over their victory, leaving the guys to sulk behind them. Hey! could ya read my story? Oh, and UPDATE!
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Title: teehee
Reviewed By: Kornychic (not logged in) On: October 26, 2004 21:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
haha! i got the sentence! Rin stuck out her tongue playfully as the girls tittered over their victory, leaving the guys to sulk behind them. awh but you made it too easy! right at the beginning? lol! usually i forget and then have to scan the chapter again bahaha. i LOVE the fact that the boys were playing poker with cookies! great idea, i do it all the time lol. OMG great chap, and YES you are entitled to have a life! youre on my fav list so i get memos lol :). im writing my own fan fic, 'Imperfect Curse', but sadly, i only have 3 reviews...not really fuel for the fire eh? I look forward to your next fic, but im still enjoying this one, its so much fun! (I thought you deserved a long review because of the partially nasty flame you received) Keep writing, and when you update, ill read, no matter how long i have to wait! Who agrees? cmon! anyway ;) CHEERS Kornychic
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Reviewed By: sabriel7 (2 laz to log on) On: October 10, 2004 01:46 CDT
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Damn these hidden reviews!
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Title: *you hear a pack of wolves surrounding you with snarls*
Reviewed By: Kitsu Kurasei On: October 09, 2004 18:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Look, I like you, really, but I need someone who doesn't put months inbetween updates unless they've abondoned it, they've put up a lengthly haitus, or if they have personal issues that doesn't involve breaking a goddamn nail! I'll still check on this but you BETTER UPDATE SOON!-Kitsu
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Title: woah
Reviewed By: kilala_kitty [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2004 22:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
woah!This is sooooo funny!That thing you wrote a couple chapters ago is either from sabriel lirael ar abhorsen garth nix is such a good author.I'm reasing a book by him right now called the ragwitch. it's really good u should read it if u haven't already!also read the keys to the kingdm!so ya i've read pretty much all your chapters in a couple of hours cuz i have no life and i've been doing this all day :'((thats supposed to be a sad face)i really like ur fic and im gonna read ur other ones too and i'll get around to the ones u suggested eventually(unfortunately for me my mom has decided to put a time limit on my computer time each day :'()oh well. its been like over a month now (todays october 2nd)so PLEASE update soon!kristen!
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Reviewed By: kirby16 On: September 20, 2004 17:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHAT A GREAT STORY!!!! Please update soon I need to see who wins. No matte who wins i can bet the outcome will be the same the other will gloat to the other. I am also happy that you showed what a bitch kikyo is! Again perfect story!
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Reviewed By: Kornychic! On: September 19, 2004 20:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was in a trance, the only way to explain it. There it is! haha i love laser tag!! do you go to the darkzone? where i live thats the place to go and GOD is it hilariously fun. i loved the chapter and ooooo you sneaky child with the cliffy at the end. the girls better win! lol GREAT JOB! CHEERS
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Title: hello again2
Reviewed By: Kitsu Kurasei On: September 18, 2004 13:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
here's your second sentence. "I was in a trance, the only way to explain it." there you go!-Kitsu
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Title: hello again
Reviewed By: Kitsu Kurasei On: September 18, 2004 13:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"Kagome snapped out of her trance and looked at Inuyasha in an innocently confused way." There is another one, I'll have it in a min.-Kitsu
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Title: Hello again
Reviewed By: Kitsu Kurasei On: September 18, 2004 13:36 CDT
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Title: yay!
Reviewed By: Rae- li On: September 16, 2004 15:41 CDT
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WOOT! Yay! That was fun! Please update soon! WEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! Sorry, kinda sugar high at the moment - _. Lol. o
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Reviewed By: dinaboo On: September 13, 2004 22:14 CDT
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luv ur story!! keep writing.
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Reviewed By: golden-rod On: September 06, 2004 21:07 CDT
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I love your story!! please update foo!!
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Title: First Time
Reviewed By: Tamashi-no-Hikari [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2004 17:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update soon!! This is probably really annoying, but I don't wanna wait 2 months for another chapter. You said "trance" twice. #1-Kagome snapped out of her trance and looked at Inuyasha in an innocently confused way. #2-I was in a trance, the only way to explain it. Also, you should really know something... Press CTR+F at the same time, while a window is active. Your contest isn't much of a contest anymore. Sorry to inform you. Great fic anyway! Keep up the good work! P.S. I hope it's green...
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