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"A Second Chance At Love" Reviews/Comments [ 92 ]
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 Reviewed By: alaskandarkangel [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 18, 2009 06:26 PST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
It... was... so... moving! i was crying throughout the whole last chapter. T-T It felt like a sequal to me somewhere in future with kagome finally meetin up with her mom 500 years later with her ans sess as much in love as they were in the 'past' with dozens of children. them havin you typical couple arguments with your typical make up... Sess finally declaring out loud that he loves Kagome. *tears fall down my cheeks with starry eyes* i can imagine it now. *sigh*
 Reviewed By: AngelHeart2122 [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 26, 2007 07:29 PDT
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I loved this story. I know how hard it must be to keep Sesshoumaru in character but you did a great job! This story had a great plot and kept me interested from start to finish. I hope that you will continue to write.
 Reviewed By: im_inuyashas_dirty_little_secret [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 22, 2007 04:24 PDT
Comment/Review:
i loved it keep up ur good story writing XD
 Reviewed By: deviousauthoress1 [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 11, 2007 23:00 PDT
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hi. Normally I don't go for Kag/Sess fics (not enough romance), but this one was great. Good job!
 Title: Wow
Reviewed By: Azkis Killer [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 10, 2007 19:06 PDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I liked it and will be looking forward to the sequal!!!!!!
 Reviewed By: fluffylover82905 [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 28, 2006 13:23 PST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
this story was great! i couldn't take my eyes away from the computer screen. wow is really all i can say.
 Title: Something wrong with chapters
Reviewed By: EvyHime [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 24, 2006 05:53 PST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS STORY, BUT SOME OF THE FINAL CHAPTERS DO NOT APPEAR ON THIS SITE...IT SAYS THEY ARE HERE, BUT THEY DO NOT LOAD...PLEASE FIX, I WANT TO READ THE FINAL CHAPTER WITH THE LEMON IN IT.
 Title: Better then some
Reviewed By: Haze06  On: November 20, 2006 00:10 PST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Some words was misspelled but other then that I really did in enjoy reading this story. You are gifted my child. Lord I sound like the old bat in the story anyway KEEP WRITING!!
 Reviewed By: Alaskan Exile [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 02, 2006 23:24 PST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I wrote a review on this one a while ago but I have to write another review now that it's done. I know the sheer size of this story might be daunting to some but it's worth the effort to read. I'm not the biggest Inuyasha fan but I love this story. The characters are well written and they're kept to the standard set in the anime. The story progresses at a nice pace and the timing is well thought out. (In fact I like it better than the original for that reason alone.) The action sequences and the plot are lovingly constructed. The ending has a nice rising action to both the battle and the love story. I like that the duchess knew when it was time to stop writing. (There's nothing worse than an ending that just drags on for centuries.) All in all a well written story with all the bits readers love.
 Title: Holy Wow
Reviewed By: _Fashion_Victim [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 16, 2005 12:29 PST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Awesome. Just
 Reviewed By: Vianne78 [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 25, 2005 03:31 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Reviewing this here this time ;) I'm just itching for the next chapter, because hey... There's a huge misunderstanding waiting to be solved. Poor Kagome, and -even if he himself wouldn't appreciate this at all- poor Sesshy. All it would take is a nice, long talk, instead of just presuming things... *grins* Youth! I'm really happy you brought Inuyasha back! I dared to hope you would.. :) And what I've said before, I'll say again: The fact that you keep them so well IC, throughout all these situations, pleases me to no end! I'm in love with this fic. Excellent work! And I love the cliffies, too ;)
 Title: Excited!!
Reviewed By: Alaskan Exile [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 24, 2005 12:24 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Ok I'd have to say you've done an excellent job here. It takes balls as a writer to kill main characters, even if you do bring them back to life. The part that I thought was the best was Inuyasha crying out for his brother. While it's something he would normally never do it fit the moment so perfectly! I told my roommate she needs to read it. Though I suggested for the sake of her eyeballs she should print it out and read it in the tub like I did. I'm still impressed at how you keep the characters in character and still manage to tell your own story. Excellent plot and I can't wait for the conclusion. It's coming soon, right?
 Reviewed By: Rainstorm61879 [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 24, 2005 03:55 PDT
Comment/Review:
OMG This update was incredible. Sorry I haven't reviewed in a while. Your updates have been awesome. I'm sorry that this will be ending soon, and yet I can't wait for the sequel. Again great update love the work can't wait for more. Also very appropriate giving Kagome a taste of the evil she could become to make her more aware and appreciate the need for her self-control
 Reviewed By: QueenBowie [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 05, 2005 22:26 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Nooooo, Cliffy! ARGH! ... - I Love the pairing - - The back stories are so great - - My heart is pounding - Keep up the awesome writing!
 Reviewed By: Alaskan Exile [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 30, 2005 20:57 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I think your writing style is great. I gave you a nine because I'm sure it will get even better with time. You've done an amazing job with staying true to the characters and the storyline. I'm impressed by the depth of your plot and skill with which it unfolds. There are just a few rough grammar and spelling issues but I'm not one to talk. I very much enjoy the way you write Fluffy. I could see this as a continuation of the story. It really has the perfect feel! I can't wait to see how you finish it.
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