| "A Second Chance At Love" Reviews/Comments [ 92 ] |
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Reviewed By: Nagasaki*not logged in! On: March 24, 2004 19:57 PST
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i loved the chapter! i can't beleive the cliffy! is miroku related or something? can't wait until your next chapter!
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Reviewed By: 12blue12(logged off) On: March 24, 2004 15:19 PST
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coolie chappie luvd it happy u posted 2 chappies i was gettin kinda mad that u didn't post for such a long time but u UPDATED yuppie well hope u can update soonn cya!
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Reviewed By: lil_rei_chan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2004 14:20 PST
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hmmm...interesting
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Reviewed By: Foxflame [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2004 13:22 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
llovee thee ficc!!! excellent!!! ples update soon- oh n about the readin ur reviews thing, the same thing happens to me- i also have a problem seeing my chapters....if i go to check on it, the only way i can see all the chapters i actually rote is by going to my chapter manager, clicking on the last chapp, and reading from there. i thought i was the only one with these problems!! atleast i noe now it aint just me.... i find that if you rite a review yourself, and post it, the rest come up. try that....wait....if you ever get this review...lol...hope my lill bit of advice helps!! maybe you have some for me, by some tiny chance??? sigh, i think it is media miner's proble... once the site had updates from feb 27 classified as new on my computer(prob fixed now tho...buh i still sense sumthin rong)! where is the humanity!!! please, iff you (or n e one reading this review can help me , n the riter of course :)- do so! now back to the story- i gotta say it again... i love love love it!!!! hurry and write like there is no tommoro!!!!- lots of luck, fox
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Reviewed By: LoupeyLady On: March 16, 2004 09:32 PST
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Please write more!!! Please write more!!! Oh, and one grammar note, "proudness" is not a word, use "pride" instead. (don't remember which chapter, but when Sesshoumaru was looking down and watching Inu Yasha keep up)
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Reviewed By: LoupeyLady On: March 16, 2004 08:50 PST
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Still reading, but wanted to make a quick note about continutity... Sesshoumaru has one arm in this chapter, but when he picks her up, he holds her "in his arms." This is a lot of fun to read, and thanks for posting!
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2004 09:24 PST
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I didn't even know this story had been updated!!!! I have to add it to my list so I'll know. Any way good chapters, I wish Sesshy and Inu would get along even if its just for a little while. Those twins sound kinda cute! Update soon!!!!
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Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2004 21:41 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome story. Can't wait for the next chapter. Hurry and update please.
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Title: UPDATE!
Reviewed By: Melli [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2004 18:54 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I love this story and encourage to continue writing!
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Title: coreection
Reviewed By: VampiricBunnyCat On: February 07, 2004 09:31 PST
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ummm its thank you, your garden vaierty obsessed fan. I just have clumsy and slip alot.
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Reviewed By: VampiricBunnyCat On: February 07, 2004 09:28 PST
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OMG!!!!!!!! i love your fan fic!!!!! keep writing!!!!! please, i'm begging you. I haven't been this hooked since...since...since i first started reading fanfiction. please i beg of thee,more muct be written!!!!!!!!! thank you you garden variety obsessed fan :-)
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Reviewed By: DeathsAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2004 01:06 PST
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love the story! please update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: lady scorpio On: January 24, 2004 20:43 PST
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way to leave us all hanging on the edge of our seats! please, tell me you are updating soon.... awesome story by the way, i love it. *sniff* *sniff* don't leave us hanging
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Reviewed By: Duchesscarml [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2004 17:03 PST
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Reviewed By: Psycho Demoness [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2004 19:08 PST
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GREAT STORY, UPDATE SOON! please? *puppy eyes*
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