| "A Second Chance At Love" Reviews/Comments [ 92 ] |
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Reviewed By: duchesscarml [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2003 13:56 PST
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Reviewed By: Fasha Youkai [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2003 12:43 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey i absolutely love this story! please, please, please update soon. i want to know what else happens it's a very wonderfully thought out story. i love it so much!!
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Title: YEEEHAAAAA!!!! ^__^
Reviewed By: Yura [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2003 08:34 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Konnichi'wa! *bows* I really love your fic, it's something that you simply can't put away until you have read it til the end. I added you to my fave list and I HOPE.. (I really do) that you will update soon again! ^__^ I like that you write long chapters! ja ne! Yura ps: You're da Best!!!
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2003 19:53 PST
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I liked it! So what is Inu ganna do when he finds out what really happened inside that barrier!? And what was he doing with Kikyou anyway!
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Title: wow...
Reviewed By: RavenCrow16 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2003 19:23 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was totally engrossed in the story! I can't wait til you update! I wanna know what else happens! Possible pup from this experience?
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Reviewed By: Lease On: December 09, 2003 18:19 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it, can't wait for the next update!
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Reviewed By: Sundragon (not signed on) On: December 09, 2003 17:22 PST
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I like it! Continue! Well... What else is there to say? Adios!
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Title: A second chance at love
Reviewed By: chibimethos On: December 09, 2003 11:57 PST
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AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! why did you stop!? It was getting good! Please hurry up and finish this
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Title: yasmin
Reviewed By: Secrets [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2003 06:29 PST
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i loooooooooooooooooooooooooooooove this story i wonder how inuyasha is gonna react !!! lol. OMG! keep writing
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Reviewed By: RED HAT On: December 09, 2003 06:08 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Alright, so now she has had sex with Sess, but it doesn't sound like their mated, right? Because he still kept referring to his sex life with others, so does this mean that Sess and Kagome are just Kissing (yea Right..hehehe) friends?
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Reviewed By: Miara (lazy) On: December 09, 2003 05:15 PST
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Oooohhh ... sooo good. That was one of the best lemons I've read. I love the way you're doing this relationship; slow buildups are a lot more interesting than 'poof, and now their in love'. Now excuse me ... I'm gonna go have nice dreams. (Oh ... and did I mention how nice it was to read an anatomically plausible lemon?)
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2003 16:38 PST
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I love your story keep going!
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Reviewed By: Laydhwk [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2003 12:48 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A most wonderful, and enjoyable story! Very smooth flow of wording. Nice build up in storyline and emotions. I like that you touch on each character staying true to each individuals personality, making them all an inportant part of the storyline, not just solely concentrating the Sess/Kag characters. Thank you for that connection, it is a welcomed change. The transformation that Sesshomaru is going through is captivating and believable. Not just a 'Hey, how ya doin? Lets go to bed now' type storyline. The build up between the two is nice. I, like Kagome, would also like to know what his meaning of the word, "Friends" means to him! *Big Smile!* Thank You AGAIN! I look forward to your next chapter!!!
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Title: hey!
Reviewed By: rosie13 (not signed in) On: December 06, 2003 11:47 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is getting better! Yay! The fluffyness is good! Its cool. Put more fluff in, please. Is there gonna be lemon? just wondering. I can be good with and without. rrr! :)
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Title: hey! :)
Reviewed By: rosie13 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2003 06:45 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, this is a wonderful fic! I agree, sess is so 'emotionally constipated'. In fact, I can't think of any better way to describe him! Thats sad. Sessy never had a friend? :'( You are really keeping everyone in character, and I like that. I can totally see Sess tilting Kagome's face toward him. It's really romantic! Anyway, keep writing! :) R&R&R! (read, relax, and review)
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