| "Good Girl Kagome" Reviews/Comments [ 185 ] |
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Reviewed By: LostDreamerGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2003 14:11 CST
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Reviewed By: LostDreamerGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2003 11:55 CST
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Reviewed By: SOOOSAD On: December 13, 2003 08:57 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Problem isn't solved because her father is still able to hurt her or any other young girl. can't wait until U attack him!
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Title: BusinessMija@aol.com
Reviewed By: Mija aka Maryann [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2003 05:04 CST
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first off I have to say you made me cry..seconed I want to ask is did this ever happen to you???..if soo I am open to talk to if you need to and nooo not how everyone always says that..I know it sounds lame..cause sometimes I think it does when people tell me the same thing..it is not easy to tell your friends or others whats happening at home and whats happened to you..and for some stupid reason you tend to believe what the stupid ass tells you..that your not anything and no one will ever love you..its stupid but effective huh?? know from expereince..sigh anyhow would love an update..huggles and smiles Mija..:-) again my emial is open if you want to talk, if its just a story then bravo, good job on the hurt and pain of it all..good writing..sad but good..love the revenge part, you never get that in real life..:-)
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Reviewed By: LostDreamerGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2003 16:45 CST
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Reviewed By: shedvl929(not logged in) On: December 11, 2003 15:59 CST
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this is an AWSOME fic!!! although i normally dont like dark fics,this is WAY too good not to like... through in a few damn hard punches for me would ya? i love this fic, and i hope you update soon. lotsa luv ^_*
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Reviewed By: ironreverss On: December 11, 2003 15:56 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
there are just a few things i would fix in this fic... spelling, and not as many notes that u were too lazy to do this or that. otherwise, its pretty good and i'm looking forward to an update.
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Reviewed By: Kaye [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2003 14:13 CST
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Omg, kick his butt Inuyasha and Sesshomaru. And throw in a punch for each reviewer too. God they are some sick funcks, excuse my language, but they are. Kagome needs a hug and WHAT ARE SANGO AND MIRKOU DOING? Are they being lechers? Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: LostDreamerGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2003 08:16 CST
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Reviewed By: Relix On: December 11, 2003 00:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Annother rape... this seems like some sorta super angst story but i still like it! Yeah i most certainly want to know what happened between Miroku and Sango, and ad something happy for a change okay? UPDATE!
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Reviewed By: firedemon86(not signed on) On: December 10, 2003 23:07 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahhh Why?? I don't usual say stuff like this cause I figure it's your fic do what you want, but Kagome gets raped twice come on! That all I had to say but I still like your fic so PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!
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Reviewed By: firedemon86(not signed on) On: December 10, 2003 23:05 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahhh Why?? I don't usual say stuff like this cause I figure it's your fic do what you want, but Kagome gets raped twice come on! That all I had to say but I still like your fic so PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!
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Reviewed By: LostDreamerGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2003 19:28 CST
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Reviewed By: LostDreamerGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2003 19:28 CST
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Reviewed By: Kaye [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2003 17:44 CST
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Really good, but uh yeah you have different names like you call Sesshy, Matthew, and Inuyasha, David and I think Sango and Kagome had different names as well. I figure you've written this story already and used different names? Besides that moment of confusin it's really good, I like it a lot. Keep it up, and what's the matter with Rin? Was she hurt by her father as well? Seems like he's had this talk before.
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