| "Good Girl Kagome" Reviews/Comments [ 185 ] |
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Reviewed By: LostDreamerGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2003 07:47 CST
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Reviewed By: CONCERNED On: December 09, 2003 07:18 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok something not right with this last chapter!! Who is DAVID!! This story seems to be different!
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Reviewed By: LostDreamerGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2003 00:43 CST
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Reviewed By: LostDreamerGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2003 20:53 CST
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Reviewed By: Kaye [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2003 20:51 CST
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Alright, I was a wimp, though I wasn't, I couldn't get through the rape scene. COuld not get to the thrid paragraph, but I can't wait until you continue. Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: LostDreamerGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2003 20:31 CST
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Reviewed By: KuramasGirl (not logged in) On: December 08, 2003 20:30 CST
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^_^ I love it to death! Can't wait for you to update!
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Reviewed By: LostDreamerGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2003 20:02 CST
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Reviewed By: Vagabond [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2003 17:17 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are doing great1 I seriously think this should be a book or something... I keep wanting to cry. It's all so real! Keep it up and UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!! ^___^ Ja Ne! ☼Vagabond☼
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Reviewed By: Vagabond [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2003 17:17 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are doing great1 I seriously think this should be a book or something... I keep wanting to cry. It's all so real! Keep it up and UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!! ^___^ Ja Ne! ☼Vagabond☼
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Reviewed By: LostDreamerGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2003 16:42 CST
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Reviewed By: Katina108 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2003 10:50 CST
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WOW!! good chapter, it's looking really good, don't know where you should take it from here it is your fic, I know it will be good either way
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Reviewed By: Naska On: December 08, 2003 08:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You done the last chapter with Kagome's flashback, well give a flashback of what her father was feeling and thinking at the time he was screwing her! Everyone who writes these fics seems to take it from the vicims point, well what was going on in his head?? Did he like it, was he angry with himself for doing it at the time he was doing it! You kinda need a perspective from the abuser!!! Because this helps gives victims a sign of what to look for BERFORE it happens. And it gets into that abusers mind, the way he thinks and feels inside!!
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Reviewed By: LostDreamerGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2003 07:54 CST
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Reviewed By: Jakkapa On: December 08, 2003 06:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow... amazing fic! That rape was so... brutal.. yeah and the idea of Sango and Miroku is a good one, you should also put Fluffy/Sesshoumaru with someone.. And of course, Inu and kag 4ever!!!
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