| "Good Girl Kagome" Reviews/Comments [ 185 ] |
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Reviewed By: tbiris [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2004 20:04 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
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The grammar wasn't all that good, and it took me some time to dechiper what you were trying to say. The plot's very good and I had a question for you before... but I can't remember it now.
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Reviewed By: Higurashi Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2004 17:56 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great chappy it made me laugh so many times can't wait till u up-date^_^
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Reviewed By: LostDreamerGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2004 01:26 CST
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Reviewed By: zuppy70 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2004 21:26 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a good chappie! I love your story! Its really good update soon, k?! ^_^
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Reviewed By: LostDreamerGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2004 18:21 CST
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Reviewed By: tbiris [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2004 14:48 CST
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*sigh* gotta stop reading now... ummm, you only had a few problems with grammar, but that's all I saw wrong with it ^_^
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Reviewed By: LostDreamerGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2004 19:52 CST
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Title: wal-mart
Reviewed By: fi-chan On: January 09, 2004 19:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol, i loved the whole wal-mart thingy, it reminds me of a friend, she has yet to accomplish about 7 things from the list of 50, i am guessing that you know wut i mean, since the oines you have are taken from that list. well anywho, such a great fic, plz continue to update ^_^.... but plz no more father screwing kagome.... kinda nasty to think that could happen to you...
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Reviewed By: LostDreamerGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2004 16:54 CST
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Reviewed By: Relix On: January 09, 2004 07:47 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, have you forgotten this story!? Please Continue!
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Reviewed By: eaglehawk On: January 02, 2004 12:26 CST
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sorry, I'm not even halfway thru yet - just saw the why vs. why not. that's a psychology class question and answer, no joke, totally serious. it's good so far, if you're lucky I might review when I'm done, but i probably won't but it's good so far.
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Reviewed By: LostDreamerGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2003 13:52 CST
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Reviewed By: KuramasGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2003 12:00 CST
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XD That was great!! I live near Virginia Beach (Cheasepeake) Maybe I should go to the Walmarts in VB and do those pranks...hmmm
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Reviewed By: LostDreamerGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2003 13:13 CST
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Reviewed By: zuppy70 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2003 11:52 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was funny!!!! ^_^ I love your story, I hope you update soon!!! ^________^
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