| "Good Girl Kagome" Reviews/Comments [ 185 ] |
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Reviewed By: shedvl929(not logged in) On: December 11, 2003 15:59 CST
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this is an AWSOME fic!!! although i normally dont like dark fics,this is WAY too good not to like... through in a few damn hard punches for me would ya? i love this fic, and i hope you update soon. lotsa luv ^_*
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Reviewed By: ironreverss On: December 11, 2003 15:56 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
there are just a few things i would fix in this fic... spelling, and not as many notes that u were too lazy to do this or that. otherwise, its pretty good and i'm looking forward to an update.
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Reviewed By: Kaye [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2003 14:13 CST
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Omg, kick his butt Inuyasha and Sesshomaru. And throw in a punch for each reviewer too. God they are some sick funcks, excuse my language, but they are. Kagome needs a hug and WHAT ARE SANGO AND MIRKOU DOING? Are they being lechers? Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: LostDreamerGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2003 08:16 CST
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Reviewed By: Relix On: December 11, 2003 00:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Annother rape... this seems like some sorta super angst story but i still like it! Yeah i most certainly want to know what happened between Miroku and Sango, and ad something happy for a change okay? UPDATE!
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Reviewed By: firedemon86(not signed on) On: December 10, 2003 23:07 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahhh Why?? I don't usual say stuff like this cause I figure it's your fic do what you want, but Kagome gets raped twice come on! That all I had to say but I still like your fic so PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!
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Reviewed By: firedemon86(not signed on) On: December 10, 2003 23:05 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahhh Why?? I don't usual say stuff like this cause I figure it's your fic do what you want, but Kagome gets raped twice come on! That all I had to say but I still like your fic so PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!
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Reviewed By: LostDreamerGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2003 19:28 CST
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Reviewed By: LostDreamerGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2003 19:28 CST
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Reviewed By: Kaye [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2003 17:44 CST
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Really good, but uh yeah you have different names like you call Sesshy, Matthew, and Inuyasha, David and I think Sango and Kagome had different names as well. I figure you've written this story already and used different names? Besides that moment of confusin it's really good, I like it a lot. Keep it up, and what's the matter with Rin? Was she hurt by her father as well? Seems like he's had this talk before.
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Reviewed By: LostDreamerGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2003 07:47 CST
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Reviewed By: CONCERNED On: December 09, 2003 07:18 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok something not right with this last chapter!! Who is DAVID!! This story seems to be different!
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Reviewed By: LostDreamerGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2003 00:43 CST
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Reviewed By: LostDreamerGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2003 20:53 CST
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Reviewed By: Kaye [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2003 20:51 CST
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Alright, I was a wimp, though I wasn't, I couldn't get through the rape scene. COuld not get to the thrid paragraph, but I can't wait until you continue. Keep it up!
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