| "One Can Only Wander For So Long" Reviews/Comments [ 257 ] |
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Reviewed By: sess_angel_2004 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2004 16:42 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow! you must brain storm al the time to come up with such a captivating pece of work. i have read many inuyasha stories, but i would have to count this as being in my top 5 faves. right now...it's sittinng in 2nd place. please upate as soon as you are able too. i know what it's like to have a complete shutdown of the brain...*brainfreeze as i call it*
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Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2004 13:51 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This if a good, tightly woven story in a AU forum. I love that Inu doesn't act like a dog from the start. Kinda makes it easy for Kag to figure out he's much more than just a "dog". The dream sequence was great, and Sess and Rin only made the story stronger. I hope your muse comes back and kisses you again after the little one starts sleeping through the night. (Can you tell I'm a mom?) Good Luck!
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Reviewed By: Beal On: February 27, 2004 11:42 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just wanted to express how much I'm enjoying your fic. (Geeze, writing reviews is hard when you hardly know where to start ^_^;; ) I could go on about how interesting it is, or how much work you obviously show in it, or original the plot is and yada yada, but I'd really rather pester you about updating! ^_^ It's really agrivating that all the really good authors seem to have lives that interfere with the updating of classic fics. ~:| *fume* (j/k :P) But seriously, I enjoy your fic very much and I'll be keeping an eye on it for updates (which, still, I hope are soon!) so keep writing!
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Title: cool!!
Reviewed By: Myuu On: February 16, 2004 05:15 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hello!! I love you fanfic, it's incredible. I must admit I've never thought of them in this sort of setting before, so it rather threw me for a spin:D I stumbled across it after looking at several of the chapter pics on Fanart Central^^ hope everything goes fine with you and your baby, when the time comes^^ Ja!!
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Title: cool!
Reviewed By: AnImEsHoRsEy [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2004 13:22 EST
Comment/Review:
WOW! I Love Yur Fic! Please Update It Soon!
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Reviewed By: Usagitsukino [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2004 17:19 EST
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Hello! How are you and the baby? Your last chapter was fine! Please keep writing!! Still not over the 'writer's block' stuff? '-' Well, what about writing first, about the reaction of Kagome about InuYasha's identity and the possible way of his recovery?? Hope you're well!^___^ see ya soon i hope!
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Title: EXCELLENT!!!
Reviewed By: InuyashaGirlie [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2004 19:17 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, so I was looking at fanart and came across this site...well I was looking through the endless number of fanart pages when I kept running across pics with your username and I must say I love them!! They are really good!! So I got curious and just had to check out your fic!! It is great, love it!! Your writing style is great!! You use enough description so I can tell what things look like and visualize them easily while not being too over descriptive. I must say that I have read a lot of fics and yours is one of the most original ideas I have come across as of yet. How did you come up with that idea? Oh, well...it doesn't matter I guess because as long as you keep updating and writing I'll be happy!! I really enjoyed this fic so please hurry and update asap!! :) P.S. I wish you and your new baby, whenever it comes, a good luck!
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Reviewed By: Scathach [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2004 17:10 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This is a very well written story. Personally, I don't mind details like including the layout of the house. They help me visualize better while I'm reading. I also like what you've done with the characters. They're just different enough to drive home the fact that this is an AU, but not so much that you don't recognize them. Looking forward to your next update.
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: kimmy On: January 30, 2004 20:32 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HI:) I Love your story so far< i can"t wait till you finish it i think you did a really good job compared to other fanfic that i have read
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Title: congrats!
Reviewed By: chevere On: January 29, 2004 08:16 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely loved your story and I hope to read more. I find the short chapters contain a lot of information and it is all centered on the plot. It makes it easy to read and very enjoyable. -- by now you have notticed that I am not a very good reviewer (give me some credit! It is the first time I post a review here!) Congratulations for your wonderful story! Keep it up! --> Chevere (AKA Clau)
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Reviewed By: Usagitsukino [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2004 17:41 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello!! CONGRATULATION for the baby!!^____^ Hope he's fine & you'll be fine taking care of him!! :) Loved it !!Kikyou iis bloody scary here!!!! Can't wait to see Inuyasha&Kagome 's story evolve! see ya!
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Reviewed By: KuramasGirl (not logged in) On: January 22, 2004 21:01 EST
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Congratulations on the baby! ^__^ I wouldn't mind waiting for a new chapter while you nurse a baby, that is more than enough reason to stop writing for a bit. I would. To the chapter: Loved it, I despise Kikyou for how easily she was betrayed and how she could have such hatred for him, so seeing her in this fiction as [basically] a bitch, is so kewl! Hope you have a healthy baby!
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2004 01:30 EST
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aiyaaa!! i didn't know you were expecting! congrats! i myself am afraid to become a mother, thankfully i don't have to worry about that untill later. i'm still in collage! nehoo. the little thing you were talking about where you wanted to write something in the next Inuyasha/Kikyo flashback that will up the rating, i beg you please don't make it a sex sean or something like that. i nearly hat to run to the bathroom for the chapter about her spying on him and her "more darker sides". i confess i have a weak stomach when in comes to Kikyo/Inuyasha stuff. i really can't stand the roting pile of dirt. she just pisses me off. i love the story though, and can't wait to read about Kag's reaction. i can compleatly see Yash as a dog. i was at my friends kenle (where she works) and they were selling an american alaskin (which i've never heard of before) but this puppy looked so much like Inuyasha it was uncanny. I wish i had a picture. it was the cutest thing ever!! *sigh* well this review is one of the longest i've ever writen so i'll leave you alone now. up date soon and keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: LLJade [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2004 00:00 EST
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I love this story! I love it, I love it, I love it! I also liked the pic you drew of Kikyo, very creepy. I wasn't offended at all by it. To he honest, I don't think she's all that liked to much. I know for a fact I want to shove bamboo slivers under her finger nails and drip pouring acid on her open wounds from torturing her. Anyway, congrats on the soone to be arrival. I can understand your not updating right away because of something like that. I hope the delivery goes well. Do you know if the baby is a boy or a girl or will it be a surprise? And I also hope your daughter feels better soon.
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Reviewed By: Amazon2000 On: January 21, 2004 23:17 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it! I look forward to reading more when you have the time to write it!
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